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like a little jewel - this is
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017
like a little jewel - this is brilliant. I particularly like the second stanza. Thank you for posting it!
Read full commentPosted in calm before
A good introduction with a
Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2017
A good introduction with a nicely flowing narrative.
If you're looking for suggestions, for historical accuracy you might want to take another look at the description of the man's background. Did you mean Westminster the school? (there isn...
Read full commentPosted in The Second World War: PART 1 - Roger Farrier - Dunkirk (1940)
ah - upgrading - I only do it
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017
ah - upgrading - I only do it if the New Thing is going to be better than the Old Thing and/or Apple announce their plans to make the Old Thing redundant, (which is a huge rip-off)
Nice to see you again! To change the font size, I think...
Read full commentPosted in I’m not upgrading
Perfect in every way, and the
Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017
Perfect in every way, and the funniest thing I've read for ages. Please come back soon with more!
Read full commentPosted in What happens near Rome
Such a sweet story! And the
Posted on Sun, 02 Jul 2017
Such a sweet story! And the sense of place and time is very well done.
'She beams at me, a sight worth missing Parkinson for' I love that line!
Read full commentPosted in The Rendezvous
Lots to like in this partial
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017
Lots to like in this partial story - I really hope you let us know what he wishes for! If you're looking for suggestions I'd say it needs quite a bit of cutting down. I'm not sure alot of the preamble is necessary, for instance - and also there's...
Read full commentPosted in Missi - a fairy story
Hi Cacophony - it's one of
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017
Hi Cacophony - it's one of our terms and conditions that everything published on our site has to be in the english language. Could you please pop a translation under the main text? Thanks
Read full commentPosted in Tumblebun
I like the ambuguity in this
Posted on Tue, 27 Jun 2017
I like the ambuguity in this piece Poppy - and it's made me hope it's about a real painting because I'd be very curious to see it!
Read full commentPosted in Not Me
I like this bit of inner
Posted on Mon, 26 Jun 2017
I like this bit of inner voice - sounds very believable, sepecially as they justify the leaving. I'm sure it's deliberately very short but even so, I think there should be a bit more in that final paragraph (or make it into two) - make the change...
Read full commentPosted in You know what to do...
'I've never heard one Muslim
Posted on Fri, 23 Jun 2017
'I've never heard one Muslim expressing sorrow or compassion for all the British people who were murdered by terrorists this year, including young girls.'
Just linking to this for your information (and anyone else reading). I'm sure it...
Read full commentPosted in Current Events: 6/22/17: 2
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