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I like this bit of inner
Posted on Mon, 26 Jun 2017
I like this bit of inner voice - sounds very believable, sepecially as they justify the leaving. I'm sure it's deliberately very short but even so, I think there should be a bit more in that final paragraph (or make it into two) - make the change...
Read full commentPosted in You know what to do...
'I've never heard one Muslim
Posted on Fri, 23 Jun 2017
'I've never heard one Muslim expressing sorrow or compassion for all the British people who were murdered by terrorists this year, including young girls.'
Just linking to this for your information (and anyone else reading). I'm sure it...
Read full commentPosted in Current Events: 6/22/17: 2
Great use of the Inspiration
Posted on Wed, 21 Jun 2017
Great use of the Inspiration Point - it's always interesting seeing where it's taken everyone!
Read full commentPosted in Celebrity Sun
What a rainbow you've created
Posted on Sun, 18 Jun 2017
What a rainbow you've created here!
Read full commentPosted in The Ghost Queen.
Things have changed a bit
Posted on Fri, 16 Jun 2017
Things have changed a bit since then!
Read full commentPosted in Politicians
some very clever bits of
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2017
some very clever bits of satire in this!
Read full commentPosted in Bugger chapter 1
Every single word of this is
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Every single word of this is pitch perfect. Are you writing as you post, or is this something finished? It's very very good
Read full commentPosted in Hello Walls (Chapter Three)
I agree - some lovely rich
Posted on Mon, 29 May 2017
I agree - some lovely rich imagery in this
Read full commentPosted in Summer's Entrance.
You built the atmosphere
Posted on Tue, 23 May 2017
You built the atmosphere really well - all the 'normal stuff' - the slight middle age crisis, the family weekend, the conversation between the girl and the father about the phone's torch. The sudden panic when the girl disappears is convincingly...
Read full commentPosted in The Dark - part 2
Mary-Ann is this meant for
Posted on Sun, 14 May 2017
Mary-Ann is this meant for Poetry Monthly? I'll pop into the correct category if you let me know (or you could do it yourself) : )
Read full commentPosted in Into The Blue
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