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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 575038 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2584 of my 15,829 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2648 votes

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Could you put a link here for

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Could you put a link here for us Elsie? I'm sure quite a few of us would like to order a copy

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Posted in Shlamek

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Elsie I just read your sad

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Elsie I just read your sad update too. I'm so sorry to hear the news and send you my sympathies. I hope you will keep this wonderful piece of life writing on here - it's a great tribute to his talent xxxx

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Posted in Shlamek

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like a little jewel - this is

Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2017

like a little jewel - this is brilliant. I particularly like the second stanza. Thank you for posting it!

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Posted in calm before

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A good introduction with a

Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2017

A good introduction with a nicely flowing narrative.

If you're looking for suggestions, for historical accuracy you might want to take another look at the description of the man's background. Did you mean Westminster the school? (there isn...

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Posted in The Second World War: PART 1 - Roger Farrier - Dunkirk (1940)

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ah - upgrading - I only do it

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

ah - upgrading - I only do it if the New Thing is going to be better than the Old Thing and/or Apple announce their plans to make the Old Thing redundant, (which is a huge rip-off)

Nice to see you again! To change the font size, I think...

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Posted in I’m not upgrading

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Perfect in every way, and the

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

Perfect in every way, and the funniest thing I've read for ages. Please come back soon with more!

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Posted in What happens near Rome

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Such a sweet story! And the

Posted on Sun, 02 Jul 2017

Such a sweet story! And the sense of place and time is very well done.

'She beams at me, a sight worth missing Parkinson for' I love that line!

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Posted in The Rendezvous

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Lots to like in this partial

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Lots to like in this partial story - I really hope you let us know what he wishes for! If you're looking for suggestions I'd say it needs quite a bit of cutting down. I'm not sure alot of the preamble is necessary, for instance - and also there's...

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Posted in Missi - a fairy story

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Hi Cacophony - it's one of

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Hi Cacophony - it's one of our terms and conditions that everything published on our site has to be in the english language. Could you please pop a translation under the main text? Thanks

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Posted in Tumblebun

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I like the ambuguity in this

Posted on Tue, 27 Jun 2017

I like the ambuguity in this piece Poppy - and it's made me hope it's about a real painting because I'd be very curious to see it!

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Posted in Not Me

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