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This is great as a plot
Posted on Thu, 02 May 2019
This is great as a plot outline, but to do it justice I really hope you develop it into something longer. It also needs a bit of work on the ending - perhaps you could take it a little further to the trial itself? I hope you do a rewrite - it's...
I love your nature pieces where you take something seemingly small and insignificant and put it under your imagination's microscope. A very well deseved cherry!
This is a great modern fairytale. If you decide to do any more work on it, perhaps that last paragraph could be a bit stronger? Lovely as it is though!
This is great as a plot
Posted on Thu, 02 May 2019
This is great as a plot outline, but to do it justice I really hope you develop it into something longer. It also needs a bit of work on the ending - perhaps you could take it a little further to the trial itself? I hope you do a rewrite - it's...
Read full commentPosted in Fundraising Parties and Other Family Minefields.
This highlights how hard it
Posted on Wed, 01 May 2019
This highlights how hard it can be to live with someone with depression - nicely done!
Read full commentPosted in Another Day Goes By
He sounds like an amazing
Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2019
He sounds like an amazing person - I'm so sorry for your loss Polly
Read full commentPosted in THE LAST DANCE
Wonderful result from the IP
Posted on Wed, 24 Apr 2019
Wonderful result from the IP - well done Penny - a well deserved cherry!
Read full commentPosted in In the wee small hours of the morning...(that's the time I miss him most of all)
Wonderful - thank you Kilb
Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2019
Wonderful - thank you Kilb. a well deserved cherry!
Read full commentPosted in The Ducking Stool In Leominster Church
Remembering is important,you
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2019
Remembering is important,you're right, and this is a beautiful way of doing it. A well deserved golden cherry!
Read full commentPosted in Crocuses in Spring
This is wonderful Di. I love
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
This is wonderful Di. I love the description of a house as being like an envelope through time - it's exactly how I feel about them!
Read full commentPosted in change of address
I love your nature pieces
Posted on Thu, 11 Apr 2019
I love your nature pieces where you take something seemingly small and insignificant and put it under your imagination's microscope. A very well deseved cherry!
Read full commentPosted in Cone Of Enlightenment
I’ll look forward to reading
Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019
I’ll look forward to reading it!
Read full commentPosted in The First Night of Spring
This is a great modern
Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019
This is a great modern fairytale. If you decide to do any more work on it, perhaps that last paragraph could be a bit stronger? Lovely as it is though!
Read full commentPosted in The First Night of Spring
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