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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
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It's the dialogue which makes

Posted on Sat, 03 Feb 2024

It's the dialogue which makes this so readable. - well done Penny4!

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 4

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coming along nicely as usual

Posted on Sat, 03 Feb 2024

coming along nicely as usual Ed - just one thing here:

I wanted him calm when I arrived. It’s hard to explain a complex situation to someone who’s been stewing their guts out for the last forty minutes.

Surely if Dev hadn't been...

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Posted in New Directions (9)

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Another fabulous piece of

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2024

Another fabulous piece of writing (I particularly loved the shaking minarets) - thank you Turlough.

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Posted in The Gaddafi Effect

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As you said, it did indeed

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2024

As you said, it did indeed all kick off today! Brilliant and very funny, thank you Phil!

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Posted in Frankie! (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 53)

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unravelling the plot very

Posted on Thu, 01 Feb 2024

unravelling the plot very nicely - well done Ed, and a good twist at the end

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Posted in New Directions (8)

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This gets better and better

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

This gets better and better Turlough - the only slight disappointment I have is the sinking feeling that the female members of your group would not have been able to enjoy such an amazing solo amble through Isfahan. Please tell me I'm wrong!

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Posted in Tea with the Coppersmith

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Beautiful, and beautifully

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

Beautiful, and beautifully illustrated too. I can't say I'll be sad to see the back of January though! Thank you for this Rhiannon

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Posted in January Skies

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Ah - the days of £495 rent

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

Ah - the days of £495 rent for a cottage . Mind you, I had a friend who was a sitting tenant and that's what she paid (until only a couple of years ago) for something quite a lot grander than the cottage in this story!

Nicely paced Ed -...

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Posted in New Directions (7)

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More fabulous travel writing,

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

More fabulous travel writing, and yes, please do what di suggests and put the link to your Flckr collection on each of these. your photos on there are wonderful!

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Posted in The Man in the Iran Mosque

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Interested to see how this is

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

Interested to see how this is going to develop - keep going Ed!

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Posted in New Directions (6)

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