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Splendidly surreal! (either

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014

Splendidly surreal! (either that or you've taken a LOT of drugs recently)

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Posted in Dabavan III

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I enjoyed this very much -

Posted on Sat, 27 Sep 2014

I enjoyed this very much - you have created a strong narrative voice. A couple of suggestions: you could possibly quicken the pace a little, also the ending is a bit weak and finally in the second paragraph I think you need to switch high and low...

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Posted in THE ISLAND

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I really like this too - you

Posted on Sat, 13 Sep 2014

I really like this too - you've really brought the characters to life - hopefully not so much as they'd notice!

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Posted in I have no sympathy

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Another compelling piece -

Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014

Another compelling piece - again I think you could have done a bit more with the ending. Do keep going. 

Although this is rated 18, which is fine, the title appears on the home page so must be a U rating. It needs to be either changed, or...

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Posted in F**k Tuesdays

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Thoroughly agree with the

Posted on Fri, 05 Sep 2014

Thoroughly agree with the above. A fascinating picture of both modern America, and mental health. I don't know if you plan to develop this further, but if you do, perhaps take it a bit slower, try not to jump from one thing to another

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Posted in The Science of Fiction

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this kept me glued to the

Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2014

this kept me glued to the screen - what a fantastic piece of writing!

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Posted in Spit Out the Bugs in Your Mouth

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I think the sparrows theme

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2014

I think the sparrows theme works beautifully - a very good piece of writing

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Posted in Sparrows

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I love this poem, but please

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014

I love this poem, but please tell me what a gont is - I have no idea and neither does google!

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Posted in The Gonts

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right, you have a fantastic

Posted on Mon, 30 Jun 2014

right, you have a fantastic ending with this Denzella, and your plot is really developing nicely. Again, you need to work a bit on the dialogue (sorry to go on about it!). Too much with nothing to break it up makes it lose authenticity

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Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Ten - 1177 Words - Updated

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this needs a bit of work - it

Posted on Mon, 30 Jun 2014

this needs a bit of work - it rambles a little - definitely worth an edit though - fantastic piece of writing!

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Posted in Upon My Arrival

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