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something missing from this

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

something missing from this sentence marandina

It’s funny how you can peace amongst the torrent of sound that comes with the endless cars, trains and human traffic of Tokyo.

This is nice start - thanks for posting! Looking forward...

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Posted in Enoshima (Part One of Two)

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aha - so that's why Dev

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

aha - so that's why Dev wanted to buy him lunch!

If you're looking for suggestions, I'd say perhaps an edit of the description in the first two thirds of this part. It's good scene setting, but verging on too much

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Posted in New Directions (3)

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Oh I am very intrigued with

Posted on Tue, 16 Jan 2024

Oh I am very intrigued with the primate talk! No idea where you plan to go with that one! Very well deserved golden cherries Jane, thank you for another brilliant episode!

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 13

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