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Glad the ambulance arrived so
Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022
Glad the ambulance arrived so quickly. I hope the person make a full recovery!
I'm glad you're enjoying your chemo curls which I also had never heard of - and as you probably know, the grass (or hair in this case) is always greener on the other side. I have very curly hair and have spent most of my life trying to make it...
Nicely written - you're setting up the story well Mono!
Is there a reason why you've changed the POV? It's lead to some repetition - you could possibly achieve the same result with conversations between the two older siblings.
Glad the ambulance arrived so
Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022
Glad the ambulance arrived so quickly. I hope the person make a full recovery!
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Hooray! So nice to see there
Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2022
Hooray! So nice to see there was a happy ending to this story - congratulations Maxine, and well done!
Read full commentPosted in The Sycamore Tree. Part Two.
How lovely - and you're
Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2022
How lovely - and you're completely right. It's a rare thing to find, but a perfect pear is perfection!
Read full commentPosted in to a pear
Very well deserved -
Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022
Very well deserved - congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in Old
That is a brilliant last
Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022
That is a brilliant last stanza - well done, and nice to see another poem from you!
Read full commentPosted in Old
nice description of the
Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2022
nice description of the interactions between the girl and her little brother
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 5
I'm glad you're enjoying your
Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2022
I'm glad you're enjoying your chemo curls which I also had never heard of - and as you probably know, the grass (or hair in this case) is always greener on the other side. I have very curly hair and have spent most of my life trying to make it...
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 14
coming along nicely Mono
Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2022
coming along nicely Mono
Read full commentPosted in Runaway mother chapter 3 part 2
Lots of twists and turns in
Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2022
Lots of twists and turns in this marandina - and very well done they are too!
Read full commentPosted in A Tale from Dark Woods
Nicely written - you're
Posted on Sun, 30 Oct 2022
Nicely written - you're setting up the story well Mono!
Is there a reason why you've changed the POV? It's lead to some repetition - you could possibly achieve the same result with conversations between the two older siblings.
Also...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 2
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