marandina
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I have 228 stories published in
28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 765794 times
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1474 of my 4,646 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1490 votes

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.
My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .
I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.
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What a wondrous image. That
Posted on Wed, 04 Aug 2021
What a wondrous image. That must have been such a wonderful sight. Your poem beautifully done, of course. Paul x
Read full commentPosted in Foxy Till Dawn
Sounded like quite a ceremony
Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021
Sounded like quite a ceremony. I imagine it must be difficult to accept step parents. It's a shame when a wonderful occasion gets overshadowed by bad feelings.
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary 38
Some nifty wordplay, Rhiannon
Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021
Some nifty wordplay, Rhiannon. Not as easy as it looks. Nicely done. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Caution!
So much to ponder with an
Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021
So much to ponder with an infinite number of variables at the end. I look forward to part 2 lol
Read full commentPosted in Focus on the lips
That's a mischievous ending
Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021
That's a mischievous ending to this episode. Still following..
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 14
Happy Lammas and a wonderful
Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021
Happy Lammas and a wonderful summation, of course :)
Read full commentPosted in Lammas
Reminds me of Glastonbury
Posted on Sat, 31 Jul 2021
Reminds me of Glastonbury Village. Beautiful imagery so well described. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Compelling Dream
Purpled Trojan princes
Posted on Fri, 30 Jul 2021
Purpled Trojan princes driving pimped BMWs. I really should read up on the historical inference in this poem. Certainly entertaining and, I imagine, cleverly done. Great stuff!
Read full commentPosted in Notes by Menelaus on Helen’s Abduction
Up to date again. The
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
Up to date again. The dialogue and chemistry across your characters is very strong. The differentiation is credible and is the essence of this series. Keep going. It's great stuff.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 13
Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words
Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021
Nicely done, Rhiannon. Words carefully intertwined with a nice rhythm and an underlying message. Hoping you are well. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in False Hope
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