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I have 228 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 766962 times and 306 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1475 of my 4,649 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1491 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1475 of my comments have received 1491 Great Feedback votes

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Carefully crafted and a

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

Carefully crafted and a lovely rhythm. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul :)

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Posted in The Wind in the Willows

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A fascinating family history.

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

A fascinating family history. [Few typos: "...example of anti-Catholism.." "... his wife was brought.." "he was one of the best men..."]

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 5

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There's definitely a fairy

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

There's definitely a fairy tale feel to this with a clear, underlying environmental warning. Nicely done. Paul :)

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Posted in Out in the Fields

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Some beautiful imagery in

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

Some beautiful imagery in here and a haunting story. As always, some wonderful lines. This also made a great short story in prose form. So many aspects and a touching, intriguing series of events. You could actually add to the story, quite easily...

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Posted in Beneath An Autumn Moon The Poem

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What a wonderful story.

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

What a wonderful story. Really enjoyed this. I read the poem first and wished I had done it the other way round!Paul

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Posted in Beneath An Autumn Moon - The Story

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Ooh what a finale! Well

Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021

Ooh what a finale! Well played, Luigi.

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Posted in Travels with my Aunt

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Passionate stuff from Alfred

Posted on Fri, 17 Sep 2021

Passionate stuff from Alfred Muggins. I am not sure that a replacement "policeman" can be found now. It's debatable whether one was ever needed but that's a whole, separate debate. In the meantime, we have the sanctity of biscuits.

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Posted in There's A New Biscuit In Town! (Called The Taliban Biscuit!) by Alfred N.Muggins

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"..as the pupil of an elf's

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

"..as the pupil of an elf's eye." You have a real talent for creative phrasing, Di. A fantastic poem and very original. Paul

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Posted in preserving time

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I remember vividly watching

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

I remember vividly watching the TV coverage at the time. Simply stunned. Let's hope something like this never happens again. Eloquent and rhythmic, of course Luigi

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Posted in Twin Towers

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Out of the darkness I came

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

Out of the darkness I came and was ready for the next instalment. Still following...

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Posted in Disenchantment 39

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