marandina
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I have 228 stories published in
28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 767027 times
and 306 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1475 of my 4,649 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1491 votes
I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.
My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .
I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.
You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685
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Should that be "When the
Posted on Wed, 06 Oct 2021
Should that be "When the living wish to cross?"
Nicely done with the tension still cranked up and a neat finish to keep the reader wanting to read on.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 42
Beautifully done.
Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021
Beautifully done. Congratulations on a thoroughly deserved POTW!
Read full commentPosted in Stone Loach
This chapter could almost be
Posted on Sun, 03 Oct 2021
This chapter could almost be from a graphic novel. I like the imagery and, as ever, the dialogue. The mythology that winds through the story arc is compelling. Keep going!
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 41
Nicely done. Many of the most
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
Nicely done. Many of the most important things are also the smallest.
Read full commentPosted in I, Caddis
Abstract and skilfully done.
Posted on Mon, 27 Sep 2021
Abstract and skilfully done. Very Ewanian. Yes...I think so...
Read full commentPosted in these are the lines
I was right there with you
Posted on Sun, 26 Sep 2021
I was right there with you with all those wonderful images from nature. Perfect.
Read full commentPosted in River Of Awareness
Why wait when you can
Posted on Sat, 25 Sep 2021
Why wait when you can everything by weight of armed forces? That's often politics boiled down to just using an army to win the argument. As Alfred says...we'll have to wait and see what unfolds now.
Read full commentPosted in Stone Age Taliban Biscuits, From Before The Age Of Sugar! by Alfred N.Muggins
Beautifully done, Luigi. Paul
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Beautifully done, Luigi. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Autumn Leaves
Tension built nicely and
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Tension built nicely and strong dialogue, of course. Cliffhanger finish!
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 40
I think every school had a
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
I think every school had a Jimmy Blue. My school had quite a few of them. Spookily, I wanted to be a journo when I was at school. I failed miserably to get anywhere near the straight As needed to get onto a relevant degree course. Oh well...as I...
Read full commentPosted in Move Away, Jimmy Blue
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