TJW

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I have 8 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2217 times and 2 of my stories have been cherry picked.
43 of my 147 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 43 votes

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Wriggle

I don't think it's wrong to kill yourself to die on your own terms: in the end ain't we all just food for worms?

That's All

Miss playing catch with my dad baseball in the Spring and football in the Fall miss playing catch with my dad that's all

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43 of my comments have received 43 Great Feedback votes

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You made mythology sexy. 

Posted on Thu, 16 Feb 2023

You made mythology sexy.  Much obliged.

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Posted in Persephone's first day

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I don't care about who you

Posted on Sat, 18 Feb 2023

I don't care about who you want to fuck.  I care about how straight is your aim.  Much obliged for the read.

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Posted in Don't Ask

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"Oh!" she exclaimed.

Posted on Mon, 30 Jan 2023

"Oh!" she exclaimed.

Doesn't the reader know she exclaimed it because of the exclamation point?  Just something that jarred me.  Disregard me at your pleasure, I ain't no expert.  Probably you wanted to emphasize the exclamation.  Job done...

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Posted in The Dream Tax

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Read this at work during my

Posted on Thu, 26 Jan 2023

Read this at work during my lunch break.  I know how you feel about cherishing every moment with your babies when they get old or are old and are getting a lot older.  My oldest babies are 23 years old, a pair of rat snakes whose eggs I incubated...

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Posted in Eric the Viking

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When one of my babies dies I

Posted on Tue, 03 Jan 2023

When one of my babies dies I bury that baby in a pot with a plant so they go on living as long as the plant grows. Much obliged for the read. 

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TJ

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Posted in He's Left These Woods

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Don't worry about it, little

Posted on Fri, 02 Dec 2022

Don't worry about it, little jeannie, I knock back 6 acetaminophen pills a day with whiskey.  

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Posted in chemo 16

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Medieval mysteries shrouded

Posted on Mon, 28 Nov 2022

Medieval mysteries shrouded in heroic battles: does the shroud make the mystery or is a mystery defined by being shrouded?  And why heroic?  Made me think of "Of Ritual and Romance"-ever read it?

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TJ

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Posted in Holly King

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Splurged at the grocery store

Posted on Tue, 29 Nov 2022

Splurged at the grocery store on a pair of pointsettas.  Fall is my favorite season because of the foilage, the colors and it's football season.  Sepia shields, leaf scars: like that. Appreciate the read 

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TJ

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Posted in Autumn carpets

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Feel a little down, if I were

Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022

Feel a little down, if I were there I 'd pick up my little jeannie and carry her.  

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Posted in Chemo 15

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Ever read Bambi, a Life in

Posted on Fri, 25 Nov 2022

Ever read Bambi, a Life in the Woods?  Fucking terrifying.  Much obliged for the read.

 

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TJ

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Posted in Hunting Without Apologies

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