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Didn't comment to be generous
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
Didn't comment to be generous but to express appreciation for the work. Pretty woman, don't walk on by, pretty woman, don't make me cry, pretty woman....yeah... listening to Roy ....I don't believe you, you're not the truth, no one could look...
I associate "those in Blue" with LEOs. This read like a crime scene, but I can't figure the Trolls. Nevermind. Poetic morsels to mentally masticate. Much obliged.
I don't live in a pedestrian friendly city so I go to the zoo or the arboretum and take my walks there. This felt like Fall . Felt like Fall here too. Yesterday was lows in the lower 80s, thick and breezy; this morning it was clear windy and in...
This is beautiful, no doubt. Recognizing the beauty I thought you chose words over meaning for impact, this is beautiful, but I don't know what it's about. I can't read the forest for the trees. That's just me. It's still beautiful.
The only reason I hated military housing is the lawn maintenance policy. Had to keep the lawn immaculate: mowed, trimmed, edged and leaves raked. Always wanted to leave the leaves alone. They serve a purpose when they fall.
little jeannie, he's right, so you got a hitch in your giddyup, well, fix it and get back up . And I don't remember you using a "vulgar" word before. Caught me off guard.
Didn't comment to be generous
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
Didn't comment to be generous but to express appreciation for the work. Pretty woman, don't walk on by, pretty woman, don't make me cry, pretty woman....yeah... listening to Roy ....I don't believe you, you're not the truth, no one could look...
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Much obliged for the read, DH
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
Much obliged for the read, DH.
A hard poetic bolus to swallow so I will choke it down. Willingly. Nothing good comes easy.
V/R
TJ
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I associate "those in Blue"
Posted on Wed, 19 Oct 2022
I associate "those in Blue" with LEOs. This read like a crime scene, but I can't figure the Trolls. Nevermind. Poetic morsels to mentally masticate. Much obliged.
V/R
TJ
Read full commentPosted in Climate, Change.
I don't live in a pedestrian
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
I don't live in a pedestrian friendly city so I go to the zoo or the arboretum and take my walks there. This felt like Fall . Felt like Fall here too. Yesterday was lows in the lower 80s, thick and breezy; this morning it was clear windy and in...
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Well, shit. . . .
Posted on Mon, 17 Oct 2022
Well, shit. . . .
Read full commentPosted in Gladys Aylward 2 - How Gladys helped her entire family
Ah, Caterpillar is a brand
Posted on Mon, 17 Oct 2022
Ah, Caterpillar is a brand name here. JCB is a brand name over there?
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What's a JCB? V/R TJ
Posted on Mon, 17 Oct 2022
What's a JCB?
V/R
TJ
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This is beautiful, no doubt.
Posted on Fri, 14 Oct 2022
This is beautiful, no doubt. Recognizing the beauty I thought you chose words over meaning for impact, this is beautiful, but I don't know what it's about. I can't read the forest for the trees. That's just me. It's still beautiful.
V/R...
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The only reason I hated
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
The only reason I hated military housing is the lawn maintenance policy. Had to keep the lawn immaculate: mowed, trimmed, edged and leaves raked. Always wanted to leave the leaves alone. They serve a purpose when they fall.
V/R ...
Read full commentPosted in In Lucid Dreams
@celticman: bruh, damn you're
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
@celticman: bruh, damn you're point blank.
little jeannie, he's right, so you got a hitch in your giddyup, well, fix it and get back up . And I don't remember you using a "vulgar" word before. Caught me off guard.
V/R
TJ
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 9
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