TJW

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My stories have been read 4962 times and 15 of my stories have been cherry picked.
7 of my 78 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 8 votes

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The Cafard 2

She hadn't seen a U.S. commander tell those under his command that if one more soldier is killed by an I.E.D., "We're going to take away one of their...
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The Cafard 1

She'd walked in when I was naked. I mean full frontal naked, dig? "Jacques, I must speak with you now." I ain't shy when it comes to my body. These...
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Frailty - End

From what he told me, and he never told me much, the lieutenant wouldn't have changed a goddamn thing. Regret just ain't a part of him. He was born,...
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Frailty

From what he told me, and he never told me much, the lieutenant became a lieutenant lest he become dead in his daddy's eyes. Military service was a...
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James Dean, a Memory and an Abrupt Ending

"You're James Dean in a uniform," she said, "is that it?" At my small piece of real estate there is a James Dean movie marathon playing. Giant ,...

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7 of my comments have received 8 Great Feedback votes

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Bee, babydoll, I've fought

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016

Bee, babydoll, I've fought three tours, if it'd save you, I'd re-up and fight another three.

 

Jack

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Posted in Bee's Journey

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What kind of cat?  What kind

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

What kind of cat?  What kind of tree?  Nature and, I think, her poetic son, Uncle Walt, would like this piece and I can hardly think of two better judges to impress.  Much obliged for the read.

 

Jack

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Posted in change of address

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Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk in the woods (or over the moors). 

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Posted in wind

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Good choice on the P.O.V., 

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Good choice on the P.O.V.,  makes this read like an accusation.  Strong, direct, YOU, no pussy footing around, style and tempo goes from single-round to semi-auto, to fully automatic.  Much obliged for the read, Ed, tense and direct.

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Posted in Big Cat

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Hey, celtic, I don't comment

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018

Hey, celtic, I don't comment a lot but I read a lot and a lot of what I read you've written though, with your talent, created is the better word. That you see where I am coming from is the beginning of understanding and honest appreciation....

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Posted in 18/02/18

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I want to read this to my

Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2017

I want to read this to my niece, though her mama might object to tits, but the idea is created with a subtle strength, the essence, I guess, more than the idea.  I've known females with hair so long and soft you'd like to sleep in it and they...

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Posted in Rebel Hair - with video

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This could easily have been

Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2016

This could easily have been too much flowers and rainbows, in a sick way, understand?  Too heavy on the affection/infatuation or too much like an entry in a stalker's diary, could have been, but ain't on account of the humor (crying, or laughing...

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Posted in Don't Think I Do (poetry monthly)