TJW

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I have 8 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1076 times and 6 of my stories have been cherry picked.
6 of my 58 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 7 votes

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Cherry

0930 H IP Living with Animals

I think I could turn and live with animals, they are so placid and self contain’d, I stand and look at them long and long. They do not sweat and...
Cherry

2105 H

I’m not a pussy. - but my head hurts so badly, my back goddamn kills me at times – doc says it’s from that specific time that IED’d blasted my ass...
Cherry

Un/said

“A friend of mine is a plastic surgeon.” - sip, swallow of a dry martini. “Yeah? You thinkin’ of getting new tits?” -sip, swallow, “I love you. Don’t...

Flower Bombs

* Inspired by last week's 50-word point and the weather. Gumball sized balls of soil and peat and seeds and fertilizer, colored in pastels; just toss...
Cherry

0147 H -2 (2031 H)

“Are you even human?” - in a voice that’d squeaked. The girl at the ink shop, taller than averege and on average weight, spunkier than average but...

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6 of my comments have received 7 Great Feedback votes

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Bee, babydoll, I've fought

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016

Bee, babydoll, I've fought three tours, if it'd save you, I'd re-up and fight another three.

 

Jack

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Posted in Bee's Journey

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Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk in the woods (or over the moors). 

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Posted in wind

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Good choice on the P.O.V., 

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Good choice on the P.O.V.,  makes this read like an accusation.  Strong, direct, YOU, no pussy footing around, style and tempo goes from single-round to semi-auto, to fully automatic.  Much obliged for the read, Ed, tense and direct.

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Posted in Big Cat

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Hey, celtic, I don't comment

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018

Hey, celtic, I don't comment a lot but I read a lot and a lot of what I read you've written though, with your talent, created is the better word. That you see where I am coming from is the beginning of understanding and honest appreciation....

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Posted in 18/02/18

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I want to read this to my

Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2017

I want to read this to my niece, though her mama might object to tits, but the idea is created with a subtle strength, the essence, I guess, more than the idea.  I've known females with hair so long and soft you'd like to sleep in it and they...

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Posted in Rebel Hair - with video

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This could easily have been

Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2016

This could easily have been too much flowers and rainbows, in a sick way, understand?  Too heavy on the affection/infatuation or too much like an entry in a stalker's diary, could have been, but ain't on account of the humor (crying, or laughing...

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Posted in Don't Think I Do (poetry monthly)