TJW

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My stories have been read 15555 times and 33 of my stories have been cherry picked.
14 of my 123 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 16 votes

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Lap Dance

"TJ, why don'tcha take off early," bossman says, "you look tired as shit." Been clockin' about four to five hours of sleep a night for the past week...
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The Net

"Shut up, bitch," I say. Don't know when or how but calling a man a "bitch" is commonplace among us, said in jest, mostly, not always. Man says...
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So

Need a light jacket in the morning and heed the weather warning; extra cool early, in the early afternoon warming blue skies later darkened to grey,...
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The War on the Homefront End

weather, obeys shit. Still leading me, she says I've lost weight, says I look tired. Why don't I take a nap in one of their guest rooms? If I nap, I'...
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The War on the Homefront 2

"Oh, I been offerin' when you were gone but you lady always told me it ain't mattered." "Don't mind my lady. Drive it now and then if you have the...

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14 of my comments have received 16 Great Feedback votes

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Bee, babydoll, I've fought

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016

Bee, babydoll, I've fought three tours, if it'd save you, I'd re-up and fight another three.

 

Jack

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Posted in Bee's Journey

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Man, who in hell do you think

Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021

Man, who in hell do you think you are writing like this?  words descriptions emotions convictions all that, listen, you don't write, you describe, illustrate with words.  HOOah, brother.

Jack

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Posted in Setting Sons

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PBS broadcast Oedipus Rex for

Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021

PBS broadcast Oedipus Rex for it's Saturday Opera program once. Stravinsky. Drank white wine and enjoyed the show. Also enjoyed this.

Much obliged,

Jack

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Posted in The Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913)

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Knew a native New Yorker. He

Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021

Knew a native New Yorker. He made fun of my accent and I made fun of his too. Only thing I appreciate about big cities is the anonymity. You managed to shine a spotlight on the anonymous and keep it anonymous, damn good style. Much obliged for...

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Posted in New Amsterdam

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Tell them kids the US Army

Posted on Sat, 06 Mar 2021

Tell them kids the US Army would be proud and honored to have any of them as a brother ( or sister) in arms. The battle they fight is harder than any we fight. A battle against their own bodies. And David's shirt is awesome.

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Posted in Don't Name Them.

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Lovely to see a comment from

Posted on Mon, 01 Feb 2021

Lovely to see a comment from you, insertsmiley

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Posted in IP- Things You've Changed Your Mind About 2

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What kind of cat?  What kind

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

What kind of cat?  What kind of tree?  Nature and, I think, her poetic son, Uncle Walt, would like this piece and I can hardly think of two better judges to impress.  Much obliged for the read.

 

Jack

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Posted in change of address

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Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk in the woods (or over the moors). 

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Posted in wind

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Good choice on the P.O.V., 

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Good choice on the P.O.V.,  makes this read like an accusation.  Strong, direct, YOU, no pussy footing around, style and tempo goes from single-round to semi-auto, to fully automatic.  Much obliged for the read, Ed, tense and direct.

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Posted in Big Cat

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Hey, celtic, I don't comment

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018

Hey, celtic, I don't comment a lot but I read a lot and a lot of what I read you've written though, with your talent, created is the better word. That you see where I am coming from is the beginning of understanding and honest appreciation....

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Posted in 18/02/18

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