TJW
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Lap Dance
"TJ, why don'tcha take off early," bossman says, "you look tired as shit." Been clockin' about four to five hours of sleep a night for the past week...
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The Net
"Shut up, bitch," I say. Don't know when or how but calling a man a "bitch" is commonplace among us, said in jest, mostly, not always. Man says...
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So
Need a light jacket in the morning and heed the weather warning; extra cool early, in the early afternoon warming blue skies later darkened to grey,...
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The War on the Homefront End
weather, obeys shit. Still leading me, she says I've lost weight, says I look tired. Why don't I take a nap in one of their guest rooms? If I nap, I'...
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The War on the Homefront 2
"Oh, I been offerin' when you were gone but you lady always told me it ain't mattered." "Don't mind my lady. Drive it now and then if you have the...
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Bee, babydoll, I've fought
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016
Bee, babydoll, I've fought three tours, if it'd save you, I'd re-up and fight another three.
Jack
Read full commentPosted in Bee's Journey
Man, who in hell do you think
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
Man, who in hell do you think you are writing like this? words descriptions emotions convictions all that, listen, you don't write, you describe, illustrate with words. HOOah, brother.
Jack
Read full commentPosted in Setting Sons
PBS broadcast Oedipus Rex for
Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021
PBS broadcast Oedipus Rex for it's Saturday Opera program once. Stravinsky. Drank white wine and enjoyed the show. Also enjoyed this.
Much obliged,
Jack
Read full commentPosted in The Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913)
Knew a native New Yorker. He
Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021
Knew a native New Yorker. He made fun of my accent and I made fun of his too. Only thing I appreciate about big cities is the anonymity. You managed to shine a spotlight on the anonymous and keep it anonymous, damn good style. Much obliged for...
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Tell them kids the US Army
Posted on Sat, 06 Mar 2021
Tell them kids the US Army would be proud and honored to have any of them as a brother ( or sister) in arms. The battle they fight is harder than any we fight. A battle against their own bodies. And David's shirt is awesome.
Read full commentPosted in Don't Name Them.
Lovely to see a comment from
Posted on Mon, 01 Feb 2021
Lovely to see a comment from you, insert
Read full commentPosted in IP- Things You've Changed Your Mind About 2
What kind of cat? What kind
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
What kind of cat? What kind of tree? Nature and, I think, her poetic son, Uncle Walt, would like this piece and I can hardly think of two better judges to impress. Much obliged for the read.
Jack
Read full commentPosted in change of address
Bronte-esque. Reads a walk
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
Bronte-esque. Reads a walk in the woods (or over the moors).
Read full commentPosted in wind
Good choice on the P.O.V.,
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
Good choice on the P.O.V., makes this read like an accusation. Strong, direct, YOU, no pussy footing around, style and tempo goes from single-round to semi-auto, to fully automatic. Much obliged for the read, Ed, tense and direct.
Read full commentPosted in Big Cat
Hey, celtic, I don't comment
Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018
Hey, celtic, I don't comment a lot but I read a lot and a lot of what I read you've written though, with your talent, created is the better word. That you see where I am coming from is the beginning of understanding and honest appreciation....
Read full commentPosted in 18/02/18
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