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Frailty - End
From what he told me, and he never told me much, the lieutenant wouldn't have changed a goddamn thing. Regret just ain't a part of him. He was born,...
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Frailty
From what he told me, and he never told me much, the lieutenant became a lieutenant lest he become dead in his daddy's eyes. Military service was a...
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James Dean, a Memory and an Abrupt Ending
"You're James Dean in a uniform," she said, "is that it?" At my small piece of real estate there is a James Dean movie marathon playing. Giant ,...
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Attempting a Villanelle - IP Winter
Heat is a soldier graceful in defeat, surrendering to victorious chill, No snow, no blizzard nor freezing sleet. Winter does not tolerate a retreat...
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0930 H IP Living with Animals
I think I could turn and live with animals, they are so placid and self contain’d, I stand and look at them long and long. They do not sweat and...
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Bee, babydoll, I've fought
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016
Bee, babydoll, I've fought three tours, if it'd save you, I'd re-up and fight another three.
Jack
Read full commentPosted in Bee's Journey
What kind of cat? What kind
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
What kind of cat? What kind of tree? Nature and, I think, her poetic son, Uncle Walt, would like this piece and I can hardly think of two better judges to impress. Much obliged for the read.
Jack
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Bronte-esque. Reads a walk
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
Bronte-esque. Reads a walk in the woods (or over the moors).
Read full commentPosted in wind
Good choice on the P.O.V.,
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
Good choice on the P.O.V., makes this read like an accusation. Strong, direct, YOU, no pussy footing around, style and tempo goes from single-round to semi-auto, to fully automatic. Much obliged for the read, Ed, tense and direct.
Read full commentPosted in Big Cat
Hey, celtic, I don't comment
Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018
Hey, celtic, I don't comment a lot but I read a lot and a lot of what I read you've written though, with your talent, created is the better word. That you see where I am coming from is the beginning of understanding and honest appreciation....
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I want to read this to my
Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2017
I want to read this to my niece, though her mama might object to tits, but the idea is created with a subtle strength, the essence, I guess, more than the idea. I've known females with hair so long and soft you'd like to sleep in it and they...
Read full commentPosted in Rebel Hair - with video
This could easily have been
Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2016
This could easily have been too much flowers and rainbows, in a sick way, understand? Too heavy on the affection/infatuation or too much like an entry in a stalker's diary, could have been, but ain't on account of the humor (crying, or laughing...
Read full commentPosted in Don't Think I Do (poetry monthly)