Fragments and symbols

I have been working on this fragmented, strange, little poem for years. It is made from fragments and half remembered poems that I have written over the years, edited into some some attempt at a longer free form poem.

Criticism, editing and feedback would be appreciated.

one - dont look for dead places

“When January unfolds, it is cold, far too cold and lifeless. The spring, with its new mornings of new life and the summer, with its heat are never...

Three - My precious bones

I remember it all unfolding how I hoped it should have been. I haven't known you very long, but you're the greatest sight I've seen. There was that...

Two - If I call, let me in

I remember how it all unfolded like I hoped it would have been, But it still made me feel crazy, sitting underneath of that tree. I'd been sitting...

Four - Her amber eyes

I remember how it all unfolded like I know it should have been. Except when I didn't say goodbye, and you walked away from me. Teach the world to...

Five - Take it easy

I found out the other month how you had died. I hadn't seen you in years, but wondered if I should cry. Then came the usual grief, sadness thing. I...

Six - The man who was

I thought this song could change the way, That people sat, sang songs and played, But they never listen to this type of crap do they? I thought this...