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Hi. I saw on the forums that
Posted on Mon, 25 May 2015
Hi. I saw on the forums that you were looking for critiques, so I thought I would make a few suggestions for you. I'm not exactly an editor, so I can't speak for the validity of my ideas, but I hope they help.
So it's obvious you...Read full comment
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Hi Jenny. It was a plesure to
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
Hi Jenny. It was a plesure to read this poem. It is lovely and I understand the sentiment exactly.
I would like to offer some advice about the rhythm of the poem.There are a few lines that seem to stop too suddenly or that go on for a few...Read full comment
Posted in A Poem For Dulcie