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Six - The man who was

By Belchman on Fri, 18 Dec 2015

I thought this song could change the way, That people sat, sang songs and played, But they never listen to this type of crap do they? I thought this...
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Five - Take it easy

By Belchman on Fri, 18 Dec 2015

I found out the other month how you had died. I hadn't seen you in years, but wondered if I should cry. Then came the usual grief, sadness thing. I...
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Four - Her amber eyes

By Belchman on Fri, 18 Dec 2015

I remember how it all unfolded like I know it should have been. Except when I didn't say goodbye, and you walked away from me. Teach the world to...
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Three - My precious bones

By Belchman on Wed, 18 Nov 2015

I remember it all unfolding how I hoped it should have been. I haven't known you very long, but you're the greatest sight I've seen. There was that...
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Two - If I call, let me in

By Belchman on Wed, 18 Nov 2015

I remember how it all unfolded like I hoped it would have been, But it still made me feel crazy, sitting underneath of that tree. I'd been sitting...
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Hi. I saw on the forums that

Posted on Mon, 25 May 2015

Hi. I saw on the forums that you were looking for critiques, so I thought I would make a few suggestions for you. I'm not exactly an editor, so I can't speak for the validity of my ideas, but I hope they help.

 

So it's obvious you...

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Hi Jenny. It was a plesure to

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015

Hi Jenny. It was a plesure to read this poem. It is lovely and I understand the sentiment exactly.

I would like to offer some advice about  the rhythm of the poem.There are a few lines that seem to stop too suddenly or that go on for a few...

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