Memo from home. Tom Saunders.

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Memo from home. Tom Saunders.

http://www.abctales.com/story/tom_saunders/memo-home

Lots of good lines in this, loved this one.

Making sure I'm not eating cold baked beans out of the can and peeing in my pants.

Sounds like something my late parents would have said, don't social workers just get up your nose? That voice they put on, so real.

Absolutely stunning, bittersweet prose about life after death. Juliet

Juliet

http://www.freewebs.com/michaeljamestreacy/index.htm Enjoyed this story. I got a bit mixed up at one point because I thought he was asking the social worker for sex (I've got a funny mind). Very good piece - well written.

 

Anyone had one of those polish students selling dodgy art? I asked her for sex. She just said "auf." Great piece.

There's nothing more mind-teasing than the incomprehensible eagerly avowed -
Dennett

Thanks, Queenie, Juliet, Mickle, Yan. If you want to buy my book, visit my blog: http://whatisthisstrangeplace.blogspot.com/
It's a good poem and none the worse for rhyming. I can see it as a song as well.

Lfuller

Whoops, sorry Tom, wrong message. Its a great story & deserved to be mentioned.

Lfuller

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