help I need your feedback!!! Please!!!

I'll give you the short version to save time. Read other people's stuff, comment, they see, might read yours, might comment - that's how it works. Just checked the track on your account - 0 Comments for other people - nuff said.

Hi eternaldream. Hope you're having a good morning. Can I ask how many comments you have left on other pieces of work?

Damn, you're quick this morning, fatboy. You must've had three weetabix.

I'll see your three weetabix and raise you five. Why is it OP I always come across as arsey in these 'please read my work' post replies and you always do it with grace and good humour? You even asked if they were having a good morning! I need to learn your ways Peskymiyagi. :-)

Hello eternaldream. With such commitment to the craft your input would be valuable to many on this site. Forget those other sites, come and lay your hat here a while. Fatboy, I now count to ten before posting, which always takes me a while this time of the morning.

I've read all of your posts, eternaldream, and left feedback. It's a good story but even good stories will get lost in the archives if you don't put yourself out there to get it read. Fatboy's advice is spot-on - it's kind of how this site works. Oldpesky's advice is spot-on, too - forget those other sites, it's here where the magic happens (depending on Weetabix intake, by the sound of things) OP & FB - you make a great double act, d'you know that? ;)

Hi Eterenaldreams I asked the same question and got the same answers basically you don't get if you don't give. I think I go now by how many people are reading my stories, they are not doing that bad so I leave them to be what they are. Should I get comments fair enough if not, well I can accept that now too and I take the good with the bad. Beat you Pesky and you Fat boy, Egg and bacon butty followed by 4 Weetabix yum yum lol

Sounds like the breakfast of champions Clive. I could never do a double act with a prose monkey Rachel - he's tried to tempt me with empty promises before but I think he's secretly falling for the short rhymey stuff. :-)

I'm new to this site too so found this helpful. Will try to comment on other peoples work and hope they will comment on mine but so far have only put on one poem.

I don't know what I am supposed to do here? I have posted my comment on Eternaldreams but this comment box keeps coming up.

It is true I have been dabbling in a spot of rhyme recently. I'm not proud, and will mention it to OTT during my next ABC OCD appointment. I'm sure she'll have a cure for me. In the meantime I'm off for a lie down, I feel an iambic pentameter coming on.

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I'm not sure what you're doing Denzella but just click on something other than post comment. I have also noticed you have written your poem in your collection rather than posting it as a poem. If you click on the poems button on the right hand side you will find it not there and nobody will get to see it unless they click on your collection in your profile. You need to go to the bit on the right that says write story, paste it in or write it in and then chhose what it is from the options (poem/story) and then submit it. Hope that helps. If your unsure go to the forums and have a read what to do on there - I know it can be a bit confusing to start. :-)

That's about right Eternal but don't get us started on the real man's breakfast cereal SHREDDED WHEAT, this could cause fractures in Anglo American relations lol.