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Hi there, as promised I'm
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015
Hi there, as promised I'm giving you feedback.
Firstly; the sentence that reads: She loves horse riding so much she never stop! Should be stops talking about it.
When a different person is talking, I would start a new line, as in:...
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Love that beginning; The wind
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2015
Love that beginning; The wind puffed soft and soothing...what an original description.
Golden sunlight washed their minds clean of all darkness...another wonderful detail.
You should write poetry with words like these.
Loved...
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Loved the idea of the pie
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
Loved the idea of the pie-faced moon and that beautiful blue gown of Kia's sounded wonderful with its gold ribbon.
Will have to wait till tomorrow to read more.
Thanks for sharing.
Jenny.
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Such a mixture of character
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015
Such a mixture of character aboard this ship...I'm loving these animals, especially Malcom, I love squirrels.
Very much enjoying.
Jenny.
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Dear Deborah,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2015
Dear Deborah,
what a truelly honest piece of writing. Like you so rightly said. Cancer can leave you in a lonely place, for however much you hear about others having it, no one can fully understand the fight you have ahead of you.
...
Read full commentPosted in A Lonely Place
Another beautifully crafted
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
Another beautifully crafted story within a poem. You're very good at rhythm and rhyme.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ariel
A great fast moving story
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015
A great fast moving story that I really enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Grown Man Cries In The Bahamas Chapter One
This is such a lovely story,
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015
This is such a lovely story, which I as child at heart really enjoyed reading. I'm glad Sun saw the error of his ways in the end.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Snowman's Plight
Thanks a million Tina, just
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015
Thanks a million Tina, just put the next part on.
You've made me very happy. ...
Read full commentPosted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Fifteen ( Pt 12 ) Shades of Winter
Wouldn't it be wonderful if
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could bottle and cork those precious moments we share with loved ones? To be able to open at leisure, so we could with all our senses, enjoy once more.
Your words touched a chord Tina, from one who finds it...
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