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A flirtatious poem Tina, when
Posted on Sun, 09 Aug 2015
A flirtatious poem Tina, when music surely is the food of love.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in An Air on a G String
I think poems are best
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2015
I think poems are best written through stream of thoughts Bee. There's so many personal feelings and emotions written here, it takes your breath away reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Beach
Hooray! For Mrs Holbrook,
Posted on Wed, 05 Aug 2015
Hooray! For Mrs Holbrook,
she reminds me of Mrs Bouquet or should I say the bucket...
Read full commentPosted in Up for Sale : Conclusion
What a liar and a cheat that
Posted on Wed, 05 Aug 2015
What a liar and a cheat that Mr Wentworth is, letting Penny have 50% rise and telling the others they won't get another penny more.
I think Mrs Holbrook is right to be annoyed and her husband should listen to her.
This is so good...
Read full commentPosted in Up for Sale : Part Two
A touching read Tina,
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015
A touching read Tina,
it's so hard to let go of a loved one, their clothing having so much meaning to the person that they were...Oh! If clothes could speak...wondering if they would remember the moments they spent with their owner....
Read full commentPosted in Clothes-Speak
Oh! Bee,
Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2015
Oh! Bee,
you say so much in this poem. When we're young we never think of growing old, or pain, it all seems like a million miles away, and yet time flies and with it so do we. Suddenly we realise that memories we shared and things we did...
Read full commentPosted in Wings of Silence
A moving poem indeed Tina,
Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2015
A moving poem indeed Tina,
so many memorable images, like;
over the rooftops a grey moon
danced and the rain stopped,
and then started again, and
we splashed in squally puddles
on the grass.
It's...
Read full commentPosted in Opacity of Glass
Hi there, as promised I'm
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015
Hi there, as promised I'm giving you feedback.
Firstly; the sentence that reads: She loves horse riding so much she never stop! Should be stops talking about it.
When a different person is talking, I would start a new line, as in:...
Read full commentPosted in No more tears
Love that beginning; The wind
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2015
Love that beginning; The wind puffed soft and soothing...what an original description.
Golden sunlight washed their minds clean of all darkness...another wonderful detail.
You should write poetry with words like these.
Loved...
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 17 Conquest of Chimera
Loved the idea of the pie
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
Loved the idea of the pie-faced moon and that beautiful blue gown of Kia's sounded wonderful with its gold ribbon.
Will have to wait till tomorrow to read more.
Thanks for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 13 Conquest of Chimera
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