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A touching read Tina,

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015

A touching read Tina,

it's so hard to let go of a loved one, their clothing having so much meaning to the person that they were...Oh! If clothes could speak...wondering if they would remember the moments they spent with their owner....

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Oh! Bee,

Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2015

Oh! Bee,

you say so much in this poem. When we're young we never think of growing old, or pain, it all seems like a million miles away, and yet time flies and with it so do we. Suddenly we realise that memories we shared and things we did...

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A moving poem indeed Tina,

Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2015

A moving poem indeed Tina,

so many memorable images, like;

over the rooftops a grey moon

danced and the rain stopped,

and then started again, and

we splashed in squally puddles

on the grass.

It's...

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Posted in Opacity of Glass

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Hi there, as promised I'm

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015

Hi there, as promised I'm giving you feedback.

Firstly; the sentence that reads: She loves horse riding so much she never stop! Should be stops talking about it.

When a different person is talking, I would start a new line, as in:...

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Love that beginning; The wind

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2015

Love that beginning; The wind puffed soft and soothing...what an original description.

Golden sunlight washed their minds clean of all darkness...another wonderful detail.

You should write poetry with words like these.

Loved...

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Posted in Chapter 17 Conquest of Chimera

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Loved the idea of the pie

Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015

Loved the idea of the pie-faced moon and that beautiful blue gown of Kia's sounded wonderful with its gold ribbon.

Will have to wait till tomorrow to read more.

Thanks for sharing.

Jenny. 

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Such a mixture of character

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015

Such a mixture of character aboard this ship...I'm loving these animals, especially Malcom, I love squirrels.

Very much enjoying.

Jenny.

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Dear Deborah,

Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2015

Dear Deborah,

what a truelly honest piece of writing. Like you so rightly said. Cancer can leave you in a lonely place, for however much you hear about others having it, no one can fully understand the fight you have ahead of you.

...

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Another beautifully crafted

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015

Another beautifully crafted story within a poem. You're very good at rhythm and rhyme.

Jenny.

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A great fast moving story

Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015

A great fast moving story that I really enjoyed.

Jenny.

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