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A touching read Tina,
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015
A touching read Tina,
it's so hard to let go of a loved one, their clothing having so much meaning to the person that they were...Oh! If clothes could speak...wondering if they would remember the moments they spent with their owner....
Read full commentPosted in Clothes-Speak
Oh! Bee,
Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2015
Oh! Bee,
you say so much in this poem. When we're young we never think of growing old, or pain, it all seems like a million miles away, and yet time flies and with it so do we. Suddenly we realise that memories we shared and things we did...
Read full commentPosted in Wings of Silence
A moving poem indeed Tina,
Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2015
A moving poem indeed Tina,
so many memorable images, like;
over the rooftops a grey moon
danced and the rain stopped,
and then started again, and
we splashed in squally puddles
on the grass.
It's...
Read full commentPosted in Opacity of Glass
Hi there, as promised I'm
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015
Hi there, as promised I'm giving you feedback.
Firstly; the sentence that reads: She loves horse riding so much she never stop! Should be stops talking about it.
When a different person is talking, I would start a new line, as in:...
Read full commentPosted in No more tears
Love that beginning; The wind
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2015
Love that beginning; The wind puffed soft and soothing...what an original description.
Golden sunlight washed their minds clean of all darkness...another wonderful detail.
You should write poetry with words like these.
Loved...
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 17 Conquest of Chimera
Loved the idea of the pie
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
Loved the idea of the pie-faced moon and that beautiful blue gown of Kia's sounded wonderful with its gold ribbon.
Will have to wait till tomorrow to read more.
Thanks for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 13 Conquest of Chimera
Such a mixture of character
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015
Such a mixture of character aboard this ship...I'm loving these animals, especially Malcom, I love squirrels.
Very much enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 11 Conquest of Chimera
Dear Deborah,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2015
Dear Deborah,
what a truelly honest piece of writing. Like you so rightly said. Cancer can leave you in a lonely place, for however much you hear about others having it, no one can fully understand the fight you have ahead of you.
...
Read full commentPosted in A Lonely Place
Another beautifully crafted
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
Another beautifully crafted story within a poem. You're very good at rhythm and rhyme.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ariel
A great fast moving story
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015
A great fast moving story that I really enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Grown Man Cries In The Bahamas Chapter One
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