Air-kiss

By hedgehog1

Sat, 07 Oct 2017
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I will always need you

{Love you?}

Love you for ever

Words of love will flow

{Course}

Between us

Although you're far away

Letters will reach your side

Crossing time and ocean

{Moana}

I must summon time to reach your side

Butterfly wings could take me there

Hurrying my flight to you

A plane I might trouble time

To wing

{Pennon}

Across that wide expanse

Love hurts when we're apart

You could regain our nest

But cannot

{Won't}

You're in solitary isolation

You have found a future there

Of you my heart is longing

Your hold

You're kissing

{Air-kiss?}

Travels to me

Not enough

Not enough

Not enough

Heartbroken

{Dolorous}

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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

This is quite intriguing, and delicately written, Edward.

Am I right in thinking it the thoughts of a child so far away (so easy to settle and put down roots so far away these days, isn't it). I wondered if Moana was her/his name, or representing the oceans between, which is the meaning of the name I think? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by hedgehog1 on

Good afternoon Rhiannon,

I wrote this poem as two lovers separated across an ocean {Moana} with the one missing the other so much and desperate to rekindle their love, but, unable to do so. Heartbroken {Dolorous} by the distance that keeps them apart.

There is of course your option of a child missing a parent which suits this poem just as well.

Edward

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Edward,

I too am intrigued by this poem. It reads to me of love that cannot be separated by oceans or sky, but is so strong that somehow or another two people will reunite.

Love will conquer all.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by hedgehog1 on

Hi Jenny,

I wrote this poem as two lovers separated across an ocean {Moana} with the one left behind so desperate to rekindle their love for each other, but, unable to do so. Heartbroken {Dolorous} by the distance that keeps them apart. Did "Love conquer all?" I really don't know.

Edward