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Great ending! Bringing it
Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2023
Great ending! Bringing it back to the horror of the first part
Very much looking forward to more, as well! This time when Despair has not settled in yet, the horror of the land turned against them. I really like how you mention the clouds and fresh wind, which seem normal when so much is going wrong, and how...
Dingle! That is near where we went on holiday when I was 5 or so :0) Everywhere, even where I am now, is tame by comparison. I do not remember the rain, only the brightness of the colours outside (probably rain washed!) and I do not even have any...
you were really brave going! There are so many horror stories about the wounds going infected, so I am glad you didn't have that, too. You described the whole experience very well
As Jenny says, brilliant use of IP! your description
"so cheap to make,
may as well throw away:
a modern era –
clean and sterile,
lazy, swinging"
made me think how plastic made possible so many things - frozen...
brilliant description of intense seconds, you moved by someone being moved by the current, moving the reader with the beauty you saw and created with the current of your words. Really enjoyed
Great ending! Bringing it
Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2023
Great ending! Bringing it back to the horror of the first part
Read full commentPosted in Devil's Advocate (Part Three of Three)
So glad you carried on with
Posted on Mon, 02 Oct 2023
So glad you carried on with this one! You have described the hospital and station very well, felt almost like being there
Read full commentPosted in Devil's Advocate (Part Two of Three)
Very much looking forward to
Posted on Thu, 28 Sep 2023
Very much looking forward to more, as well! This time when Despair has not settled in yet, the horror of the land turned against them. I really like how you mention the clouds and fresh wind, which seem normal when so much is going wrong, and how...
Read full commentPosted in The Parasite: Chapter One
Rhiannon's glorious poem
Posted on Thu, 28 Sep 2023
Rhiannon's glorious poem evoking the wonders of Pembroke's coast is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
Read full commentPosted in Pembrokeshire — two seasons
Dingle! That is near where we
Posted on Wed, 27 Sep 2023
Dingle! That is near where we went on holiday when I was 5 or so :0) Everywhere, even where I am now, is tame by comparison. I do not remember the rain, only the brightness of the colours outside (probably rain washed!) and I do not even have any...
Read full commentPosted in Beneath Cnoc Daod
you were really brave going!
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
you were really brave going! There are so many horror stories about the wounds going infected, so I am glad you didn't have that, too. You described the whole experience very well
Read full commentPosted in Misguided In The Early 90s
very glad you keep swimming
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
very glad you keep swimming against the tide! This is magnificent
Read full commentPosted in I Found the Sea
"Our adventure is
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
"Our adventure is
over. There’s a lot of things for the skip." great poem
Read full commentPosted in Nisi
As Jenny says, brilliant use
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
As Jenny says, brilliant use of IP! your description
Read full comment"so cheap to make,
may as well throw away:
a modern era –
clean and sterile,
lazy, swinging"
made me think how plastic made possible so many things - frozen...
Posted in Fantastic Plastic!
brilliant description of
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
brilliant description of intense seconds, you moved by someone being moved by the current, moving the reader with the beauty you saw and created with the current of your words. Really enjoyed
Read full commentPosted in Hush
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