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nice description of the
Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2022
nice description of the interactions between the girl and her little brother
I'm glad you're enjoying your chemo curls which I also had never heard of - and as you probably know, the grass (or hair in this case) is always greener on the other side. I have very curly hair and have spent most of my life trying to make it...
Nicely written - you're setting up the story well Mono!
Is there a reason why you've changed the POV? It's lead to some repetition - you could possibly achieve the same result with conversations between the two older siblings.
nice description of the
Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2022
nice description of the interactions between the girl and her little brother
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 5
I'm glad you're enjoying your
Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2022
I'm glad you're enjoying your chemo curls which I also had never heard of - and as you probably know, the grass (or hair in this case) is always greener on the other side. I have very curly hair and have spent most of my life trying to make it...
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 14
coming along nicely Mono
Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2022
coming along nicely Mono
Read full commentPosted in Runaway mother chapter 3 part 2
Lots of twists and turns in
Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2022
Lots of twists and turns in this marandina - and very well done they are too!
Read full commentPosted in A Tale from Dark Woods
Nicely written - you're
Posted on Sun, 30 Oct 2022
Nicely written - you're setting up the story well Mono!
Is there a reason why you've changed the POV? It's lead to some repetition - you could possibly achieve the same result with conversations between the two older siblings.
Also...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 2
This is a good start! Onto
Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022
This is a good start! Onto the next part...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 1
Thank you for taking me on
Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022
Thank you for taking me on your walk Ed - I hope you noticed the new Inspiration Point this week?
Read full commentPosted in Kicking Leaf
Wonderfully spooky and
Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022
Wonderfully spooky and perfect for the season - congratulations Jenny - well deserved golden cherries!
Read full commentPosted in Cause To Be Heard on Samhain's Eve
This clever little short
Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022
This clever little short story is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
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Read full commentPosted in The Cost of Living
Your enthusiasm for halloween
Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022
Your enthusiasm for halloween shines out from each word!
Read full commentPosted in All Hallows Eve
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