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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
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it must be really difficult,

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021

it must be really difficult, because it is his story as you say (and how brilliant that he's forgotten) - but it's also your story and I can't even begin to imagine how traumatic it was for you 

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I love the jackdaw bits if it

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021

I love the jackdaw bits if it helps! - and I hope you do put more in about what happened, but it's going to be difficult if you're doing it from the child's POV. It's definitely a story that needs to be told

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Posted in part 5

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Where she throws all the

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021

Where she throws all the money into the water - it's so moving. Poor Mary

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Posted in part 5

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Catching up - love the idea

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Catching up - love the idea of being warm inside with your thoughts, waiting for Spring - thanks for this Jenny!

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Posted in Drifting On The Muse

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we don't have them here as

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

we don't have them here as far as I know, or at least they don't seem to be as unwilded as in some areas - how frightening that they swooped at your cat!! Beautiful creatures though, as is this poem

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You took me right there with

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

You took me right there with you - thank you, and congratulations on the very well deserved pick!

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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I don't remember the social

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

I don't remember the social worker having a name before - perhaps you could add her job along with her name when she's first mentioned in this part? I'm really enjoying this Di - please keep going!

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Posted in part 4

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Just read this for the first

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2021

Just read this for the first time. It's beautifully done Di. You really capture the child's eye view of events in this piece (which I think I said about the previous part!). It's so sad. Do keep on writing!

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Posted in part 3 (redrafted)

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yes, you have to be carefukl

Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2021

yes, you have to be carefukl with some things don't you, and others not so much. But it's nice your animals had a treat at least! 

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That's a charming little

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

That's a charming little rhyme Rhiannon - and it would lend itself so well to being read out loud, with pictures and actions too - well done!

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