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I'm enjoying this Parson. It
Posted on Sat, 29 Apr 2017
I'm enjoying this Parson. It got off to quite a slow start (perhaps a bit of an edit needed there) and in this part I'm suggesting you give your reader a bit more about the characters. Just saying the man looked like a guide at the Jorvik Viking...Read full comment
Posted in Boatman's dream 2
The short sharp works really
Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017
The short sharp works really well, and I imagine it sounds very effective too.
When you miss someone and it's all you can write, is something I think many of us can identify with.
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Posted in Mum's the word
Always nice to read something
Posted on Fri, 03 Mar 2017
Always nice to read something with a happy ending! I like the detail in this story, and the narrative flows really well. If you're looking for feedback, there are some auto correct typos, and some places where I think you might have repeated the...Read full comment
Posted in The Fairy Ring