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Much better as a two-parter!

Posted on Tue, 11 Aug 2015

Much better as a two-parter!

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Posted in Whistle on the wynd part 2

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Very nicely paced, and I like

Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2015

Very nicely paced, and I like the interweaving of the relationship issues with the main plot. I think it needs a through going through for simple things that could do with being fixed (you say he has epilepsy, then you say he has an unrecognised...

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Posted in whistle on the Wynd (edit)

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this is a good opening piece

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

this is a good opening piece - I like the way you give so many clues to the reader

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Posted in The Mohair Bear - part one

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how beautiful this is! I wish

Posted on Tue, 04 Aug 2015

how beautiful this is! I wish you'd post more often..

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Posted in Elephant Song

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Welcome to ABC R. - I enjoyed

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2015

Welcome to ABC R. - I enjoyed this story. Was it deliberate that you kept it gender neutral right up until fairly near the end? 

A couple of suggestions:

you change to the present tense after this

One of them reaches for his...

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Posted in Passage

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I enjoyed this - thank you!

Posted on Wed, 29 Jul 2015

I enjoyed this - thank you!

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Posted in High Summer

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you could also put a photo up

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015

you could also put a photo up? (don't forget to choose only something which has permission to publish elsewhere)

for anyone who didn't know before this poem, catherine's written (beautifully) about this subject in the past - you should...

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Posted in Not Years

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Wonderful! You have such a

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015

Wonderful! You have such a talent for creating characters and a sense of place. Well done, and thank you for posting this

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Posted in The Almsbury Ritual Part 2

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very real and beautifully

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015

very real and beautifully captured. Well done Bee. 

on a very frivolous note, I had an MRI on my head last year (they found nothing!) and they gave me headphones and a list of music. Took one look and said no thanks. Then the minute I was...

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Posted in Panic Button

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Hello Crowefoot - firstly

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2015

Hello Crowefoot - firstly welcome to ABC! I've read all three parts and I think this has the making of a really good story

A couple of suggestions:

in part one, I realise you're trying to differentiate between the characters but I...

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Posted in A Prophecy of a Beautiful Devil Part 1

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