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My stories have been read 288062 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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539 of my comments have received 549 Great Feedback votes

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Some great imagery in this

Posted on Sat, 04 Feb 2017

Some great imagery in this prose (poem?). Welcome back!

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Posted in Half a Cup

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What a fascinating piece of

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017

What a fascinating piece of life writing! I would love to hear more about those years of wandering. Any plans to write it up?

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Posted in (Not) Counting the Minutes at Falmouth Town Station

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agree with all the above -

Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017

agree with all the above - such beautiful and detailed images in this word picture!

One small typo : you have a rogue apostrophe in the first stanza

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Posted in Promises of Spring.

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I like it too!

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016

I like it too!

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Posted in Colour Blind

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I think this is a very

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016

I think this is a very touching poem

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Posted in Silence

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This is brilliant, and a well

Posted on Sun, 04 Dec 2016

This is brilliant, and a well deserved pick! 

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Posted in Journey to Minneapolis

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the calm words (complete lack

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

the calm words (complete lack of hyperbole) make a much greater impact than otherwise - as a poem it's flawless - from one mother to another it's unbearable and my heart goes out to you

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Posted in Blue

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you wouldn't believe the

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

you wouldn't believe the number of times I look at something on here from the past - a poem or a story - to find one of bee's generous, encouraging comments - she was everywhere! And so I suppose this is a good place to post your poem because we...

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Posted in Invincible

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re-test (sorry Joe, will buy

Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2016

re-test (sorry Joe, will buy you a drink next time I see you)

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Posted in A Fathers Advice.

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Very well written - really

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2016

Very well written - really enjoyed reading this. The outside loo sounds particularly awful.

One small thing - it might just be me but I got stuck on this sentence for a bit - might it be more understandable with a comma after 'had'?...

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Posted in Studland, missing fingers, a rabid dog called Bob and a privy

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