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My stories have been read 288062 times
and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
539 of my 10,375 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 549 votes
Some great imagery in this
Posted on Sat, 04 Feb 2017
Some great imagery in this prose (poem?). Welcome back!
Read full commentPosted in Half a Cup
What a fascinating piece of
Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017
What a fascinating piece of life writing! I would love to hear more about those years of wandering. Any plans to write it up?
Read full commentPosted in (Not) Counting the Minutes at Falmouth Town Station
agree with all the above -
Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017
agree with all the above - such beautiful and detailed images in this word picture!
One small typo : you have a rogue apostrophe in the first stanza
Read full commentPosted in Promises of Spring.
I like it too!
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016
I like it too!
Read full commentPosted in Colour Blind
I think this is a very
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016
I think this is a very touching poem
Read full commentPosted in Silence
This is brilliant, and a well
Posted on Sun, 04 Dec 2016
This is brilliant, and a well deserved pick!
Read full commentPosted in Journey to Minneapolis
the calm words (complete lack
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016
the calm words (complete lack of hyperbole) make a much greater impact than otherwise - as a poem it's flawless - from one mother to another it's unbearable and my heart goes out to you
Read full commentPosted in Blue
you wouldn't believe the
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016
you wouldn't believe the number of times I look at something on here from the past - a poem or a story - to find one of bee's generous, encouraging comments - she was everywhere! And so I suppose this is a good place to post your poem because we...
Read full commentPosted in Invincible
re-test (sorry Joe, will buy
Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2016
re-test (sorry Joe, will buy you a drink next time I see you)
Read full commentPosted in A Fathers Advice.
Very well written - really
Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2016
Very well written - really enjoyed reading this. The outside loo sounds particularly awful.
One small thing - it might just be me but I got stuck on this sentence for a bit - might it be more understandable with a comma after 'had'?...
Read full commentPosted in Studland, missing fingers, a rabid dog called Bob and a privy
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