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A good start! I like the way

Posted on Sun, 10 Apr 2016

A good start! I like the way it jumps all over the place (in sync with the character). Do post more soon

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Posted in Vodka

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A very interesting idea!

Posted on Sat, 02 Apr 2016

A very interesting idea!

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Posted in Another time Another Place

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I didn't see that coming!

Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2016

I didn't see that coming! This might work even better if you drew it out a bit - spent more time on the hunt for the man, perhaps even his history. Very well done as it is though!

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Posted in Scarlet sunrise

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couple of typos in this:

Posted on Fri, 25 Mar 2016

couple of typos in this:

look pass the bed

look pass the person

and also I'm not sure about a la chacun - shouldn't it be chacun a ses besoins etc?

 

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Posted in Caffeine Supernova, #1

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Typo: it's Jackson Pollock

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Typo: it's Jackson Pollock

also I think Warhol used soup cans, not beans

Interesting piece - thank you!

 

 

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Posted in Today's Art Scene

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I will be looking forward to

Posted on Sat, 12 Mar 2016

I will be looking forward to part two as well. You've done a good job with introducing different aspects of what looks to be an interesting plotline.

About the tenses: the best thing would be to find someone to read it through - or read it...

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Posted in Searching for Change ch.1

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I never knew what all those

Posted on Mon, 07 Mar 2016

I never knew what all those terms meant either!

this one needs a little re-read - just a few small typos to remove

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Posted in About Par for the Course... Golf 2

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If you were to label your hat

Posted on Tue, 01 Mar 2016

If you were to label your hat series numerically, (keep the titles you've chosen, just add Hat 1, 2 etc above) all these people who are glad this one is part of a bigger thing might go back and read them. I'm not sure how clear it is from what...

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Posted in Don't I Look Like Myself?

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I'm so sorry you're feeling

Posted on Sat, 20 Feb 2016

I'm so sorry you're feeling discouraged with ABC - the people who get most from it seem to be the ones who engage with others. I know you've commented on other people's work but perhaps comment more and read more. You haven't been here all that...

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Posted in Hat in Hand at the Hatter's

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A lovely positive message!

Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2016

A lovely positive message!

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Posted in But Honestly

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