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I will be looking forward to
Posted on Sat, 12 Mar 2016
I will be looking forward to part two as well. You've done a good job with introducing different aspects of what looks to be an interesting plotline.
About the tenses: the best thing would be to find someone to read it through - or read it...Read full comment
Posted in Searching for Change ch.1
If you were to label your hat
Posted on Tue, 01 Mar 2016
If you were to label your hat series numerically, (keep the titles you've chosen, just add Hat 1, 2 etc above) all these people who are glad this one is part of a bigger thing might go back and read them. I'm not sure how clear it is from what...Read full comment
Posted in Don't I Look Like Myself?
I'm so sorry you're feeling
Posted on Sat, 20 Feb 2016
I'm so sorry you're feeling discouraged with ABC - the people who get most from it seem to be the ones who engage with others. I know you've commented on other people's work but perhaps comment more and read more. You haven't been here all that...Read full comment
Posted in Hat in Hand at the Hatter's