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A good start! I like the way
Posted on Sun, 10 Apr 2016
A good start! I like the way it jumps all over the place (in sync with the character). Do post more soon
Read full commentPosted in Vodka
A very interesting idea!
Posted on Sat, 02 Apr 2016
A very interesting idea!
Read full commentPosted in Another time Another Place
I didn't see that coming!
Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2016
I didn't see that coming! This might work even better if you drew it out a bit - spent more time on the hunt for the man, perhaps even his history. Very well done as it is though!
Read full commentPosted in Scarlet sunrise
couple of typos in this:
Posted on Fri, 25 Mar 2016
couple of typos in this:
look pass the bed
look pass the person
and also I'm not sure about a la chacun - shouldn't it be chacun a ses besoins etc?
Read full commentPosted in Caffeine Supernova, #1
Typo: it's Jackson Pollock
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016
Typo: it's Jackson Pollock
also I think Warhol used soup cans, not beans
Interesting piece - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in Today's Art Scene
I will be looking forward to
Posted on Sat, 12 Mar 2016
I will be looking forward to part two as well. You've done a good job with introducing different aspects of what looks to be an interesting plotline.
About the tenses: the best thing would be to find someone to read it through - or read it...
Read full commentPosted in Searching for Change ch.1
I never knew what all those
Posted on Mon, 07 Mar 2016
I never knew what all those terms meant either!
this one needs a little re-read - just a few small typos to remove
Read full commentPosted in About Par for the Course... Golf 2
If you were to label your hat
Posted on Tue, 01 Mar 2016
If you were to label your hat series numerically, (keep the titles you've chosen, just add Hat 1, 2 etc above) all these people who are glad this one is part of a bigger thing might go back and read them. I'm not sure how clear it is from what...
Read full commentPosted in Don't I Look Like Myself?
I'm so sorry you're feeling
Posted on Sat, 20 Feb 2016
I'm so sorry you're feeling discouraged with ABC - the people who get most from it seem to be the ones who engage with others. I know you've commented on other people's work but perhaps comment more and read more. You haven't been here all that...
Read full commentPosted in Hat in Hand at the Hatter's
A lovely positive message!
Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2016
A lovely positive message!
Read full commentPosted in But Honestly
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