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Very well written - really

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2016

Very well written - really enjoyed reading this. The outside loo sounds particularly awful.

One small thing - it might just be me but I got stuck on this sentence for a bit - might it be more understandable with a comma after 'had'?...

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Posted in Studland, missing fingers, a rabid dog called Bob and a privy

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Really enjoyed reading this

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2016

Really enjoyed reading this Soulman - always interesting to hear about the hidden places in the world, and very nice to see you back again!

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Posted in A Very Special New Year

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What a splendidly surreal

Posted on Thu, 27 Oct 2016

What a splendidly surreal story!

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Posted in Meeting a wolf

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Hits all five senses at once

Posted on Wed, 31 Aug 2016

Hits all five senses at once - this is a real prize of a poem, and our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!

Please share/retweet if you like it

 

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Posted in The Grief of Gaziantep.

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Another really good piece,

Posted on Mon, 15 Aug 2016

Another really good piece, full of atmosphere. At a push I'd say I like the first couple of paragraphs in the first version slightly more than in this one, but that might be solely because of the number of 'she's in this one. Great pick. Hope you...

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Posted in Hazel

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I especially like the way you

Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016

I especially like the way you insert the really big stuff (the father's voyeurism and abuse) into the more inconsquential storyline. I'm not sure if you're looking for feedback, but if you are I'd suggest perhaps losing or shortening some of the...

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Posted in Des Moines, 1979

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I'm so sorry you still aren't

Posted on Sun, 07 Aug 2016

I'm so sorry you still aren't getting email notifications Alphadog. Lluis the techie is working on it. Is there any other possible reason why they mightn't work for you? Could you check the email address on your account is still current? Have you...

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Posted in The Cobbe House v a hidden revelation and a decision

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This is very well written - I

Posted on Thu, 04 Aug 2016

This is very well written - I'm enjoying it!

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Posted in Ned (2)

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I had to read back at one

Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016

I had to read back at one point to work out how many people there were and who was who, but apart from that this is great. The dialogue feels very authentic - really nice to see some prose from you! 

One typo - discrete should be discreet...

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Posted in Dogs

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looking forward to finding

Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016

looking forward to finding out more - Welcome to ABCTales!

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Posted in Memoirs of a Wanna Be: Intro and Chapter 1

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