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Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC.
Posted on Fri, 06 Dec 2013
Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC. I'm not a fantasy fan, so you should take it as a compliment when I say I found this very readable. You write with an easy fluency, although it would be a good idea to have another edit to remove some typos. I will...Read full comment
Posted in Last Words...
Hi Maddi - you said all
Posted on Sun, 13 Jan 2013Hi Maddi - you said all comments welcome so .... first "Fred woke with a finish" ... not quite sure finish is the right word here More generally .... I enjoyed reading this, but I think it needs some rearranging. It's quite odd that you don't...Read full comment
Posted in Just Starting: Part 1
there's something different
Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2011there's something different about the style of this, compared to your usual - what do you think fatboy? It's very good, and I really like it - it just seems unlike you (not in a bad way)Read full comment
Posted in I Can't Help Wishing Christopher