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548 of my comments have received 558 Great Feedback votes

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one to read and reread - the

Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2016

one to read and reread - the spaces between the words too. 

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Posted in What happens with hope on a bank holiday

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so strange and touching how a

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016

so strange and touching how a few words can take on such a special significance. Perhaps it's because of the care she's showing for you in saying them? 

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Posted in Drive carefully

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This is a wonderful poem

Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016

This is a wonderful poem Lavadis. I've removed the photo pending your reply to my email

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Posted in Cannibal

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There's a lot to cut when you

Posted on Sat, 21 May 2016

There's a lot to cut when you do your next draft - too much waffle, but the voice is very well done - very believable, and this is a brilliant line! Do keep going..

'He is a Smiths playlist away from rock bottom'

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Posted in Tara (snippet 2)

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Part of something bigger? I'd

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2016

Part of something bigger? I'd love to read more of this..

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Posted in Untitled

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Beautifully done. The

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

Beautifully done. The repetition works really well. One to read aloud

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Posted in Delicate

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you rated the story fine! It

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

you rated the story fine! It's just if you know you have something not U rated in the first few lines, then make sure you create a teaser without those words - so in this instance I omitted the 'fucked in the head'. I hope that makes sense

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Posted in Some False Sense Of Security

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You've correctly categorised

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

You've correctly categorised this as an 18, but the teaser (which defaults to the first couple of lines) appears on the front page, and so it has to be U rated - as well as the title.  I've fixed this one for you

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Posted in Some False Sense Of Security

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if it's published, why not

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

if it's published, why not put a link here, so people can buy it? If not, I'd love to read another extract!

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Posted in Mwambeshi Memories

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A delightful piece of life

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

A delightful piece of life writing. Is it part of something bigger?

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Posted in Mwambeshi Memories

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