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a very interesting piece!

Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015

a very interesting piece!

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Posted in “We must dare to invent the future”

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nice dialogue!

Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015

nice dialogue!

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Posted in AlterNativity - Part 4 - Get Away! In A Manger

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I've enjoyed the gritty

Posted on Wed, 16 Dec 2015

I've enjoyed the gritty description in these pieces - it's very well done. I'm not so sure about the dialogue which is confusing in places - sometimes I'm not completely sure what's happening and who everyone is which is a shame because I think...

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Posted in Gemma (Part III)

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Very nice! Two terrifyingly

Posted on Sun, 13 Dec 2015

Very nice! Two terrifyingly vivid characters I very much look forward to reading more about. 

there's a 'was' missing from your penultimate para

 

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Posted in 'The first date' a chapter from my new novel 'And?'

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A beautiful piece of memory.

Posted on Thu, 10 Dec 2015

A beautiful piece of memory. I was disappointed when it finished!

I think you have an autocorrect typo in the third para - where/were

 

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Posted in Josh Rimmer

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I like the way you're

Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2015

I like the way you're approaching it from different angles. Perhaps you should make clear in the title this is a part of the previous story?

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Posted in The Ripped T-shirt III - Whiskey & Justice on the rocks

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There's some wonderful

Posted on Sun, 06 Dec 2015

There's some wonderful imagery in this piece, although it needs a little edit as it is perhaps a bit repetitive in places - also some grammatical typos (eg don't/doesn't). Welcome to ABC!

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Posted in The Fallen one

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very nicely written. I wonder

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

very nicely written. I wonder how many penis adorned desks there are in the country? 

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Posted in the anatomically correct penis

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Really enjoyed these vivid

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015

Really enjoyed these vivid flashes of memory. A tiny bit confusing from time to time but I suppose that's the nature of memories. Welcome to ABC and please write more soon!

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Posted in Marcia (from "Ribbentrop's Chair")

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beautifully done Tina. Have I

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015

beautifully done Tina. Have I read this before?

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Posted in Seeing the Light

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