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I have 228 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 767262 times and 306 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1475 of my 4,649 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1491 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1475 of my comments have received 1491 Great Feedback votes

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I have always used "mom"

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020

I have always used "mom" Maybe it's a Brummie thing

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Posted in Mum Or Mom. Mummy Or Mommy.

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Feisty and fun in a dark,

Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2020

Feisty and fun in a dark, dynamic way. Well done on POTD.

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Posted in Pigeon Variations - Ch 4 - Hero Grill Chef

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A lovely tribute. I have not

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2020

A lovely tribute. I have not one but four of the little perishers!

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Posted in Memories Of You I Keep

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To be honest, I thought you

Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2020

To be honest, I thought you were being descriptive as opposed to Glass Octupii being a species. What do I know?!

Agreed, I enjoyed the reply as well :)

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Posted in Midnight Ocean

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"A glass octopus" - unique

Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2020

"A glass octopus" - unique imagery all over again :)

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Posted in Midnight Ocean

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*I am grateful to other folks

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

*I am grateful to other folks who also gave me very detailed comments including airyfairy

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Posted in Empire State (Part Three) - The Devil in Tintagel

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Cheers Drew. It was your

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Cheers Drew. It was your feedback that pushed me to think bigger. Thanks for the inspiration to aim higher. Paul

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Posted in Empire State (Part Three) - The Devil in Tintagel

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I wish I flowed with prose

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2020

I wish I flowed with prose like that. So fluent, so rhythmic

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Posted in Aware Of Letting Go

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Oh yes - Barnstaple it is. I

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Oh yes - Barnstaple it is. I've been there a few times as well. Thanks for spotting that and duly edited. There is a Barnstable in the US which would throw the geography out a tad! Yes, there is a part 2 at...

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Posted in Empire State (Part Three) - The Devil in Tintagel

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Ah. Not so good. On that word

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Ah. Not so good. On that word pivots the emotion of this poem. Moving and now even more personal. Paul

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