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I have 237 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 857216 times and 318 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1531 of my 4,795 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1549 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1531 of my comments have received 1549 Great Feedback votes

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A story that undulates under

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

A story that undulates under the earth with a stellar cast of worms. I can imagine you reading this at the next ABCtales event, Luigi. Adroitly done, as always. Keep well. Paul 

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Posted in Twists and Turns

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"And if someone can't get any

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

"And if someone can't get any manna, then I don't want any of it, either." Well, yes.

 

All very nicely done with such imaginative flair. Paul 

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Posted in Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 3)

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Yep, you have a great rhythm

Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023

Yep, you have a great rhythm with your writing and a wonderful imagination. I seem to remember you saying you were going to have a tilt at self-publishing a while ago. Did you ever get around to it? Righteo....off to part 3..

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Posted in Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 2)

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Thanks for reading, David.

Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023

Thanks for reading, David. Yes, I guess 1912 was a precursor to the First World War et al.

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Posted in A Night to Remember

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Made me think of Jim Carey's

Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023

Made me think of Jim Carrey's "Bruce Almighty" at times. You are such a natural storyteller that shines through in your prose. Looking forward to the next part.. 

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Posted in Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 1)

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"...fingered expanse of the

Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023

"...fingered expanse of the horse-chestnut leaf."

 

A beautiful moment captured so poignantly. My cherry tree has started to bud last few days. Spring is a magical time of year :) 

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Posted in Graceful Uplifting

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"Putin is death.."  Well it

Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023

"Putin is death.."  Well it appears so. An end to all wars, amen. And we hope for Ukraine to prevail and peace to reign. Nicely done again, Alfred.

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Posted in Putin’s Blessing on the Old Soviet Union : An Anti Alternative View of Easter In Ukraine and Russia by Alfred N.Muggins

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Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023

Nicely done, Alfred Muggins (And David). Congratulations on the pick and a happy Easter to you :) 

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Posted in Easter : A Prayer For The Future by Alfred N.Muggins

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I guess you don't choose who

Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023

I guess you don't choose who you end up in a ward with. It must be hard not being able to sleep at night and having to listen to other people rambling. Covid as well...slings and arrows, Jean. Your accounts are as absorbing as ever and written so...

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Posted in Bitty Bsarbie Boob part 3

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It was lovely to hear you

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023

It was lovely to hear you read live, Rhiannon. Enjoyed reading the written versions just now (the link to your second story is broken).

 

Wishing you a peaceful, Good Friday :) 

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