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I have 226 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 685796 times and 303 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1455 of my 4,608 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1469 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1455 of my comments have received 1469 Great Feedback votes

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That sounds like fab news,

Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2022

That sounds like fab news, Jean. Keep up the good work in the New Year. Hoping 2023 is kind to you. Take care. Paul x

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Posted in Chemo 17

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Lordy, that whole world of

Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022

Lordy, that whole world of dating apps has passed me by. Thankfully. A funny, almost visceral account of what looks like a brutal world of honesty and dishonesty. Enjoyed. Paul :)

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Posted in The Tinder Date (Tinder is the night)

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"But it is the dead of winter

Posted on Tue, 27 Dec 2022

"But it is the dead of winter, I said, and 

the ravens threw their heads back and laughed."

There's that inner dialogue and, yes, a sense of melancholy. The language used makes it all so credible and authentic. Paul

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Posted in December Ravens

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"On crystal pavements

Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022

"On crystal pavements

Oak leaves glued in layers"

 

Some beautiful lines in there, Jane. The final stanza sweeps us through the seasons. Very nicely done. Paul

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Posted in Winter Light

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"...wan white sun in the

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2022

"...wan white sun in the light grey cloud.."

 

You have certainly chrystalised your thoughts on an atmospheric December day. Very nicely done, of course. Paul

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Posted in Temperate December, variations

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Beauty and such soul. So

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

Beauty and such soul. So sorry for your loss, Ewan. Paul 

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Posted in Hereafter

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Happy Solstice, Jenny. A poem

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

Happy Solstice, Jenny. A poem grounded in the elements and the elemental. Nicely done. Paul :) 

 

 

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Posted in Ancient Festival

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Posted on Sun, 11 Dec 2022

I enjoyed hearing you read this last night too. A moving story, for sure. Paul 

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Posted in May you live all the days of your life

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A picturesque walk in the

Posted on Mon, 12 Dec 2022

A picturesque walk in the cold. Visual and evocative with some lovely, turns of phrase. Enjoyed. Paul :) 

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Posted in Walk In December Snow

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The thrill of snowfall

Posted on Mon, 12 Dec 2022

The thrill of snowfall through the eyes of children. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Yes, we have snow in Northants today too. Paul :) 

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Posted in Thrill

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