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I have 247 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1125167 times and 334 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1590 of my 4,985 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1616 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

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1590 of my comments have received 1616 Great Feedback votes

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Enjoyed your poem, Rhiannon.

Posted on Wed, 25 Jan 2023

Enjoyed your poem, Rhiannon.

My guess is maybe "Ratatouille" the movie. I haven't seen it so I am probably wrong. I do like this IP as I'm a bit of a movie buff.

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Posted in Under his hat

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I actually read your poem a

Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023

I actually read your poem a couple of times trying to work out what the movie is. If Rhiannon is correct below then it's one I haven't seen.....and clearly should! Paul x

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Posted in Right Here In Contemplation

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Hi Jenny. No idea what the

Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023

Hi Jenny. No idea what the movie is but it sounds like quite an adventure. Enjoyed this epic of drama and meditation. Paul :) 

 

[Thank you for reading my Collie story. Took it down to re-write as it needed more work. And thanks for...

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Posted in Right Here In Contemplation

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"...and spears of snowdrops

Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023

"...and spears of snowdrops point..." A salient contrast of winter moving to spring. From the icy depths to the warmth of hope, succinctly captured in your poem. Paul 

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Posted in January (northern hemisphere)

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"I watched her stretching

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2023

"I watched her stretching shadows.." Beautiful metaphors and images. Just wonderful, Jane 

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Posted in She said her name was Winter

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I like the nods to Poe, as

Posted on Sat, 21 Jan 2023

I like the nods to Poe, as well. Great stuff, Penny! Paul 

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Posted in Welkin Spirit

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A story within a poem with a

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

A story within a poem with a horizon that's tantalisingly out of reach and remains unsaid. Very nicely done. Paul 

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Posted in The bridge of Sante Fe

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A wonderful story that made

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

A wonderful story that made me smile...as did Kurt's comment above! :)

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Posted in Extraordinary Experience On The Bus

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"a quiet, cheerful giver

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

"a quiet, cheerful giver
not looking for thanks and honour
is truly blest
far more than the receiver,
or the ostentatious giver."

 

Those last few lines capture the moral for me. I find it easier to give than...

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Posted in For whose benefit …?

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"...to sit and fish for

Posted on Wed, 11 Jan 2023

"...to sit and fish for inspiration;

yet no ideas catch my hook." Another meditative journey. Enjoyed, of course. Paul :)

 

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