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I have 245 stories published in
28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1106866 times
and 331 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1578 of my 4,953 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1602 votes
I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.
My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.
Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .
I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.
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"...for we will all return
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2022
"...for we will all return
home, being stardust to a brand
new day." Philosophical and adriotly poetic, of course. Very nicely done, Jenny. Paul :)
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I can hear the rain and see
Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
I can hear the rain and see the trees with autum tints. A lovely vision. Very nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in by Craven Arms
Keep counting down and keep
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
Keep counting down and keep writing, our Jean. You are getting there! Take care of yourself. Paul x
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 15
Never really got into
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
Never really got into Hawkwind....just before my time:)
Enjoyed the images, sounds and colours in this piece. Flashbacks to times gone by make us who we are. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Edge Of Time That Influenced Mine - Nik Turner Tribute
Plutin never made it to G20
Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2022
Plutin never made it to G20 fearing assassination. Now we have UN calling for reparartions re Ukrainen and India and China becoming frustrated with the ongoing conflict. Pluto might be a good option for the old despot!
Read full commentPosted in The Cosmonaut’s Last Journey (It’s All Over Now) by Alfred N.Muggins
"I, imprisoned in bars of
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
"I, imprisoned in bars of noise, wonder if ability to understand
guilt's a prerequisite for intelligence"
A poignant lamentation. Topical with the world's population now at 8 billion. There's an overwhelming argument for...
Read full commentPosted in at bay
Posted on Mon, 07 Nov 2022
There's certainly depth in the sentiments in this. Layers of meaning. Roads are great analogies and you have used it so eloquently and so well. Great stuff, Jane. Paul
Read full commentPosted in They've Closed the Road
A salient nod to Blake
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
A salient nod to Blake,Rhiannon. I like the use of the refrain at the start of the stanzas. "More than fingers will get burnt..." Let's hope not. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Guard!!
"I'm not a Muntjac, just a
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
"I'm not a Muntjac, just a buck..."
Vivid and evocative. I could picture the path of the animal in the wild. Very nicely done, Jenny. Paul :)
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"...appealing, cheering
Posted on Thu, 03 Nov 2022
"...appealing, cheering
in the weakness and bleakness
of autumn’s loss..."
Contrasting images and emotions. Autumn is such a transition.
Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Aging Glow
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