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I have 237 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 865314 times and 318 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1532 of my 4,802 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1550 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1532 of my comments have received 1550 Great Feedback votes

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Ooh those last couple of

Posted on Sat, 22 Oct 2022

Ooh those last couple of paragraphs! [Should that read "stake out"?] Looking for forward to the next part. Paul :) 

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Posted in "The Coffee House Spy" 6

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Boris is in the running to be

Posted on Thu, 20 Oct 2022

Boris is in the running to be PM again. It's a crazy world we are living in! 

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Posted in Alfred Awakes From A Dream, Having Arrived In Arthur’s Kingdom (A Part of Their Holiday In Devon) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 3

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You bring the memories of

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022

You bring the memories of younger days back in a haunting way, Jenny. It's good to have fond reveries. Enjoyed your latest diary entry (I imagine?) even if I now have images of long, chestnut-coloured hair swinging away. Take care. Paul :) 

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Posted in Interesting Times

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Elusive kites and skittish

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022

Elusive kites and skittish pheasants. Another enjoyable ramble with you, Rhiannon. Lovely pics, as well. Paul :) 

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Posted in Above Old Downton Lodge

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Well you have set this up

Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022

Well you have set this up nicely. Looking forward to the continuation! Paul :) 

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Posted in Alfred Awakes From A Dream, Having Arrived In Arthur’s Kingdom (A Part of Their Holiday In Devon) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2

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My kinda poem. Love it! Paul

Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2022

My kinda poem. Love it! Paul :)

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Posted in "Halloween or Samhain"

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The more fun you make it, the

Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2022

The more fun you make it, the easier it is for children to learn and remember. This kind of material is ideal for educational purposes. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul :) 

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Posted in Fish Finger Maths!

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A soliloquy of sorts so well

Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2022

A soliloquy of sorts so well done, Sean! Paul :) 

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Posted in Hell Puppets

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." ..each upturned plant or

Posted on Fri, 14 Oct 2022

." ..each upturned plant or face, like hope..." Yes, the wonder of trees and plants in a turbulent world. We remain blessed. I found the poem emotional and quietly euphoric in the end. Very nicely done, Di. Paul :) 

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Posted in tree time

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"... watched by guardians of

Posted on Wed, 12 Oct 2022

"... watched by guardians of moon and stars.." Thoughtful and moving. The answers are somewhere in the afterthoughts, I am sure. [Should that be "... losing their husbands"?] Paul :) 

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Posted in Only The Lonely

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