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I have 107 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 231770 times and 86 of my stories have been cherry picked.
39 of my 1,289 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 41 votes

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RJ Newlyn

 

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Cherry

My dead diary - parties

A story with 200-word episodes. In which there is much drinking and inappropriate behaviour but not very much plot.
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My dead diary - beginnings

A story of sorts in 200-word episodes. In which the dead diary is begun and our narrator feels he ought to get out more.
Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 26

A story in 200-word episodes. In which an angel and devil begin a beautiful friendship.
Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 25

A story in 200 word episodes. In which two devils have a fight in cyberspace (or is it?) and one of them loses.
Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 24

A story in 200-word episodes. In which our infernal hero meets his infernal nemesis and messes up someone's council flat.

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39 of my comments have received 41 Great Feedback votes

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Well done

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

Very good. Nicely paced, about the right length and good comic timing.

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Posted in Brightest and Best of the Sons of the Mourning?

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Beautiful

Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016

I really liked this episode - has a powerful atmosphere. Depends what you want to do with it, but I'd suggest having a re-read to iron out some typos and minor quirks. These are the ones I happened to notice and should be easily fixable (although...

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Posted in The Baobab Tree (2)

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Very good - one of your best,

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

Very good - one of your best, I think. Says all sorts of things in so little time.

Rob

 

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Posted in His Father's Eyes

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Yes, very good

Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2014

An interesting and well-written piece. Feels as if there are other chapters to come (I hope so).

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Posted in Forest of Eden - Part One- A New Beginning

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Welcome to ABCtales and I

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013

Welcome to ABCtales and I hope you keep posting. You write well and there's a nice flow to this. It feels quite unremittingly bleak, but everyone has their own preferences. I guess you might want to work a little on the overall arc of the story...

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Posted in Recovery

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