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I really liked this episode - has a powerful atmosphere. Depends what you want to do with it, but I'd suggest having a re-read to iron out some typos and minor quirks. These are the ones I happened to notice and should be easily fixable (although...
Welcome to ABCtales and I hope you keep posting. You write well and there's a nice flow to this. It feels quite unremittingly bleak, but everyone has their own preferences. I guess you might want to work a little on the overall arc of the story...
Well done
Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016
Very good. Nicely paced, about the right length and good comic timing.
Read full commentPosted in Brightest and Best of the Sons of the Mourning?
Beautiful
Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016
I really liked this episode - has a powerful atmosphere. Depends what you want to do with it, but I'd suggest having a re-read to iron out some typos and minor quirks. These are the ones I happened to notice and should be easily fixable (although...
Read full commentPosted in The Baobab Tree (2)
Very good - one of your best,
Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015
Very good - one of your best, I think. Says all sorts of things in so little time.
Rob
Posted in His Father's Eyes
Yes, very good
Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2014
An interesting and well-written piece. Feels as if there are other chapters to come (I hope so).
Read full commentPosted in Forest of Eden - Part One- A New Beginning
Welcome to ABCtales and I
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013
Welcome to ABCtales and I hope you keep posting. You write well and there's a nice flow to this. It feels quite unremittingly bleak, but everyone has their own preferences. I guess you might want to work a little on the overall arc of the story...
Read full commentPosted in Recovery
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