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I have 107 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 317774 times and 86 of my stories have been cherry picked.
48 of my 1,304 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 50 votes

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RJ Newlyn

 

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Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 23

A story in 200-word episodes. In which some hordes of hell meet a sticky end in a council estate at the hands of one of their own.
Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 22

A story in 200 word episodes. Join any time you like. In which a devil meets a geek and ruins his breakfast.
Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 21

A story in 200-word episodes. Our infernal hero escapes from cyberspace but loses his disguise.
Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 20

A story in 200-word episodes. Getting a bit complicated to explain now - a devil and angel wandering around in cyberspace sort of plot.
Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 19

A story emerging in 200-word episodes. Our heroes have found their way into the social network, but it's not really what it's cracked up to be ...

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48 of my comments have received 50 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful

Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016

I really liked this episode - has a powerful atmosphere. Depends what you want to do with it, but I'd suggest having a re-read to iron out some typos and minor quirks. These are the ones I happened to notice and should be easily fixable (although...

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Posted in The Baobab Tree (2)

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Very good - one of your best,

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

Very good - one of your best, I think. Says all sorts of things in so little time.

Rob

 

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Posted in His Father's Eyes

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Yes, very good

Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2014

An interesting and well-written piece. Feels as if there are other chapters to come (I hope so).

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Posted in Forest of Eden - Part One- A New Beginning

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Welcome to ABCtales and I

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013

Welcome to ABCtales and I hope you keep posting. You write well and there's a nice flow to this. It feels quite unremittingly bleak, but everyone has their own preferences. I guess you might want to work a little on the overall arc of the story...

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Posted in Recovery

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