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I have 107 stories published in
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My stories have been read 317670 times
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48 of my 1,304 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 50 votes
RJ Newlyn
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If you meet me, have some sympathy 23
A story in 200-word episodes. In which some hordes of hell meet a sticky end in a council estate at the hands of one of their own.
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If you meet me, have some sympathy 22
A story in 200 word episodes. Join any time you like. In which a devil meets a geek and ruins his breakfast.
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If you meet me, have some sympathy 21
A story in 200-word episodes. Our infernal hero escapes from cyberspace but loses his disguise.
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If you meet me, have some sympathy 20
A story in 200-word episodes. Getting a bit complicated to explain now - a devil and angel wandering around in cyberspace sort of plot.
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If you meet me, have some sympathy 19
A story emerging in 200-word episodes. Our heroes have found their way into the social network, but it's not really what it's cracked up to be ...
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Beautiful
Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016
I really liked this episode - has a powerful atmosphere. Depends what you want to do with it, but I'd suggest having a re-read to iron out some typos and minor quirks. These are the ones I happened to notice and should be easily fixable (although...
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Very good - one of your best,
Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015
Very good - one of your best, I think. Says all sorts of things in so little time.
Rob
Read full commentPosted in His Father's Eyes
Yes, very good
Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2014
An interesting and well-written piece. Feels as if there are other chapters to come (I hope so).
Read full commentPosted in Forest of Eden - Part One- A New Beginning
Welcome to ABCtales and I
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013
Welcome to ABCtales and I hope you keep posting. You write well and there's a nice flow to this. It feels quite unremittingly bleak, but everyone has their own preferences. I guess you might want to work a little on the overall arc of the story...
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