Bloodline Dynasty Chapter Drafts

Welcome to my draft collection for my book Series Bloodline Dynasty. Write now I am working on the first book and will be posting the finished drafts here for viewing. Please give your opinion and critiques on my work! I would love the feedback.

Bloodline Dynasty follows the lives of three individuals. A powerful witch. A werewolf who will soon be made leader of his hunt. Lastly, a young woman whose life begins to spiral after becoming a fearsome vampire. Follow these characters as they struggle with the changes of life and the politics of the supernatural underworld that humanity has no idea lies right under their noses. 

Chapter 1: Sawyer (Welcome to Little Star)

(Art done by @fangsyrup on Insta) I held the smoke in my lungs for only a few seconds before breathing it out into the crisp night air of the forest...

Chapter 2: Dante (Lunar Cycles)

(Art done by @Fangsyrup on insta) When I woke up in the stables I felt the usual disorientation I got after a night of running under the full moon...