Song Lyrics

These are lyrics I'm turning into songs. They're mostly rough drafts so feedback is still appreciated. These poems are made the way I want them to be but there's always going to be a better word or phrase to use so I could use some help with that. Thanks if you comment!

Chapter 20 years and 9 months

Verse 1 Dope sick now that she ain't In my veins Wanting back but I'm withdrawing from the rain I swear everything I see has a double meaning I could mask the pain but never stop the bleeding

Was it a dream or reality?

I still ask myself this question.