Bloody, Brawling business
By Sir Loin
An action, can maybe be considered fantasy book. there will be supernatural things involved.
I want to post a chapter each week so i'd love it if people followed it and kept up to date. I want feedback. My goal is to get way better at writing by the strories completion.
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(OLD) Bloody, Brawling Business chapter 1
He put his arm behind him to catch his fall as he stumbled backwards. The rough pavement’s sharp rocks tore into the skin covering his elbow as he...
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(OLD) Bloody, Brawling Business chapter 2
When Yuda received Piko's proposal over the phone, he couldn’t get over how foolish it sounded. And as the conversation replayed over and over in his...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH1 (part 1/2)
Rats screeched from inside the cage which shook in Newton’s hands as he almost lost his balance atop the wooden fencepost. “Chuck it,” Scarlet...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH1 (Part 2/2)
Newt sat up on his knees and looked at Ferdinand for a second, expecting him to reach out to help him. When Ferdinand made no attempt to do as such,...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH2
Newton spent the night in the hospital’s foyer. He lay across a row of seats, replaying memories in his head over and over. He grasped at every...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH3
The Burial was quicker than Newton had expected. The grave was already dug when he got there, and he along with Paul and two other people carried...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH4
Scarlet’s remnants were falling through the gaps in Newton's fingers, slipping away, bit after bit. She was disappearing and Newton needed somewhere...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH5
Newton fiddled with the lighter in his pocket, turning it between his fingers as he sat in the living room, anticipating the doorbell’s ring. It came...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH6
Newton would’ve jumped out of the moving car if it meant he'd get away with the skull. But the drive was short and Tiro had made sure to keep it out...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH7
Newton held out his hand. “Is that a yes?” Tiro asked. Newton gave a grunt along with a nod. The following moments were few but insufferable, waiting...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH8
Tiro had Newt by the shoulder and neck before he could even leave his seat. He pulled him down and grabbed him by the arm Newton was using to hold...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH9
The beauty of Bame blazed, ignited by the Afternoon sun. Its cobbled streets were reanimated from their state the night before, and they were...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH10
Tiro crouched down next to Newton and reached out his hand towards him, but it was instantly slapped away. Newton stormed off down the hall and sat...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH11
“I’m glad you and Newton have found common ground,” said Yara. “Yeah, something’s seemed to click after his visit with Davilios. He definitely knows...
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Bloody, Brawling Business CH12
(havent yet edited this chapter so there may be some slight changes later) “The king of Bame,” Scarlet said under her breath. She let out a soft...
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