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I have 112 stories published in
9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 131004 times
and 154 of my stories have been cherry picked.
430 of my 3,096 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 448 votes
Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings. Lots of looking out of the window. Hello, and thanks for dropping by.
I don't really agree with
Posted on Mon, 06 Jun 2016
I don't really agree with Phineas on this. I thought the acceptance of the existence of vampires was an interesting take on a well-known theme, a bit akin to the way Alien Nation or the recent Aliens TV series postulated a world where aliens...
Read full commentPosted in Sangreville
Explosive ending - oh no, not
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2016
Explosive ending - oh no, not Marc! You capture the grubbiness and seediness of power play, and the sadness of the individual lives destroyed on all sides. This has been a really gripping and enjoyable story.
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 44
Lovely little scene. The
Posted on Sat, 21 May 2016
Lovely little scene. The dialogue is cracking, as always.
Read full commentPosted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 15 (Revised)
Loved it! Laughed out loud
Posted on Fri, 13 May 2016
Loved it! Laughed out loud at the detectives. Can't wait to see the next lot of trouble!
Read full commentPosted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 14
You tell that Freddy where to
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016
You tell that Freddy where to go.
I loved the description of your childhood efforts to stay awake, and the skilful way you marry them up with your present situation. I hope you had a great day at the ballpark.
Read full commentPosted in Resistance and Rejuvenation
Lovely to see this back.
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016
Lovely to see this back. Good set up for this chapter - very interested to see how the resourceful Chantelle resolves her problem!
Read full commentPosted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 13
I really enjoyed this. It's
Posted on Sun, 08 May 2016
I really enjoyed this. It's a cliche to say 'we've all been there', and maybe not exactly in that way, but the emotions are so recognisable, and the remedies, with personal variations, are pretty universal. The bit about social media made me...
Read full commentPosted in Tara
Really interesting, the sick
Posted on Sun, 08 May 2016
Really interesting, the sick but not-feeling-sick perspective. Good to know that your writing is helping you through this. Please keep posting the updates!
Read full commentPosted in Sick and Tired and Strong
The strands all coming
Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2016
The strands all coming together and it is still well controlled - the reader feels confident that you have command of the plot! (Not always the case with thrillers). Marc has a real depth of character - I like the way you present the loving...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 34
The opening paragraphs of
Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015
The opening paragraphs of this chapter are absolutely splendid writing. For me, Marc is the most vivid of all the characters. The bit about the hip being a pestle and mortar is particularly striking.
Also another development in this...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 22
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