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535 of my 3,513 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 560 votes
535 of my comments have received 560 Great Feedback votes
Really interesting the way
Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2017
Really interesting the way this deals with memory and recall. The bit where the mother insists that there were always birthday parties, flatly contradicting the memory, and causing the narrator to doubt it. I like the way things aren't neatly...Read full comment
Posted in Yellow Ribbons
I really liked the structure
Posted on Fri, 06 Oct 2017
I really liked the structure and flow of this, Rhiannon. It reads very well. There are some bizarre interpretations of all sorts of things out there. Whatever one's own particular religious views, some of the conspiracy and end-of-world...Read full comment
Posted in False Announcements!
Great that this appeared on
Posted on Thu, 28 Sep 2017
Great that this appeared on National Poetry Day - it is a great poem. I'm doing a course at the moment on 'creative non-fiction' - which turns out to be a lot more complicated than making 'what I did on my holidays' more interesting - and this...Read full comment
Posted in Flying Ops
Really liked this, Rhiannon.
Posted on Mon, 18 Sep 2017
Really liked this, Rhiannon. The rhyming works really well, and parts of it reminded me of riddle poems, which fits in with the idea of the wise owl. It's a wonderful idea, that we could have a wise and perceptive companion who could keep an...Read full comment
Posted in Watch your back!
It's interesting how poems
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
It's interesting how poems take different people different ways. I thought it was very clear, but in a very subtle way. I think you have to stay true to your vision, especially as it has struck a chord with a number of readers. That's the...Read full comment
Posted in time travelling
I like the way this shows
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2017
I like the way this shows that depression invades all the senses. The description of the grin 'held up with string' is particularly striking and really conveys the mask that people use to disguise the reality. And of course, as you indicate,...Read full comment
Posted in The Dark