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Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings.  Lots of looking out of the window.  Hello, and thanks for dropping by.

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Readings of Episodes One and Two of the Pad Life Journals are now available on Sound Cloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-968566758   More to follow!

 

 

 

 

766 of my comments have received 818 Great Feedback votes

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Clear-eyed about the risks

Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016

Clear-eyed about the risks and the fears, and offering encouragement that it can be done.  I felt as thought I wanted to know what had been the tipping point for this woman, what finally made her feel she and her child deserved better.  A good...

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Posted in The First Step

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I've read both parts of this

Posted on Tue, 21 Jun 2016

I've read both parts of this through a couple of times now, and really enjoyed the lyricism and magic.  I did feel that perhaps there was a little too much back story to start off with - possibly you could have established the circumstances...

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Posted in Fishing Dreams by the Spree- Part 2

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Another great piece of

Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016

Another great piece of writing.  Your description of Ali is so moving. 

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Posted in Ali, Frazier, Chuvalo and Evelyn

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Oh dear.  I predict a riot.

Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2016

Oh dear.  I predict a riot.

Just one typo - when Chantelle comes to join our two heroes, Josiah briefly turns into Joshua. 

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 19

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I don't really agree with

Posted on Mon, 06 Jun 2016

I don't really agree with Phineas on this.  I thought the acceptance of the existence of vampires was an interesting take on a well-known theme, a bit akin to the way Alien Nation or the recent Aliens TV series postulated a world where aliens...

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Posted in Sangreville

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Explosive ending - oh no, not

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2016

Explosive ending - oh no, not Marc!  You capture the grubbiness and seediness of power play, and the sadness of the individual lives destroyed on all sides.  This has been a really gripping and enjoyable story.

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Posted in EBOLOWA 44

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Lovely little scene.  The

Posted on Sat, 21 May 2016

Lovely little scene.  The dialogue is cracking, as always.

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 15 (Revised)

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Loved it!  Laughed out loud

Posted on Fri, 13 May 2016

Loved it!  Laughed out loud at the detectives.  Can't wait to see the next lot of trouble!

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 14

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You tell that Freddy where to

Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016

You tell that Freddy where to go.

 ​I loved the description of your childhood efforts to stay awake, and the skilful way you marry them up with your present situation.  I hope you had a great day at the ballpark.

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Posted in Resistance and Rejuvenation

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Lovely to see this back. 

Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016

Lovely to see this back.  Good set up for this chapter - very interested to see how the resourceful Chantelle resolves her problem!

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 13

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