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I have 132 stories published in
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My stories have been read 418877 times
and 192 of my stories have been cherry picked.
977 of my 4,415 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1062 votes
Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings. Lots of looking out of the window. Hello, and thanks for dropping by.
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Readings of Episodes One and Two of the Pad Life Journals are now available on Sound Cloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-968566758 More to follow!
I SO want to be these
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2019
I SO want to be these children and have this adventure!
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 7
Lovely response to the IP.
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2019
Lovely response to the IP. Have you ever seen the film 'The Last Unicorn'? My children adored it when they were small - in fact both have their own copies now because they wore out our old videotape! This reminded me of that - the fleeting...
Read full commentPosted in There are no such things as Unicorns
I can't imagine what these
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2019
I can't imagine what these anniversaries must be like for a native New Yorker. I made my first visit to the city at the end of last year, and visited the twin towers memorial and museum. Profoundly moving, and even on my side of the pond it...
Read full commentPosted in My heart still bleeds...my eyes still cry
Taut, jabbing lines,
Posted on Tue, 10 Sep 2019
Taut, jabbing lines, emphasising the unsettling content. So clever in its combination of things - it gave me a rolling feeling in the pit of my own stomach when I read about the 'torture of team picks' and reminded me of feeling physically sick...
Read full commentPosted in September Chills
Hooray! Thank you for this,
Posted on Mon, 09 Sep 2019
Hooray! Thank you for this, Luigi! Delighted to have an ending to the story, and one that saw justice done.
Read full commentPosted in Jack-In-The-Box
I like the way it shifts with
Posted on Mon, 09 Sep 2019
I like the way it shifts with those last two lines. We're used to seeing this story presented as pure submissive devotion - good to see a different, beautifully realised take.
Read full commentPosted in Her Gift
I've just been to a new van
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019
I've just been to a new van Gogh exhibition - what they call an 'immersive experience', with a sort of son et lumiere to start with and then a virtual reality trip through some of the paintings. Your poem reminds me of his starry night skies. ...
Read full commentPosted in Looking up
Delightful. I would have
Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2019
Delightful. I would have loved reading this as a child. I'm really enjoying reading it now!
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 5
Absolutely love it. I'm sure
Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2019
Absolutely love it. I'm sure Adam and Eve would think we'd all gone bonkers. Very nice piece of work.
Read full commentPosted in Dear Adam & Eve
I really love the way your
Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2019
I really love the way your accounts of your travels mix the everyday and the wondrous - all the practical things, like the toilets and the gippy tummies, and the strange and new things, like the amazing tombs and the dilemma of the children. It...
Read full commentPosted in TRIP TO EGYPT 4 - VALLEY OF THE TOMBS
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