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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2849623 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1691 of my 15,685 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1725 votes

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grimms31

‘Shouldn’t you be going up the road, about now?’ says Jaz, smiling into his pint. ‘To get ready for your big date.’ Rab’s bottom lips droops and he...
Cherry

grimms30

Jaz catches Pizza Face a slap on the back of the head when he catches him and Tony smoking a roll-up at the bottom of the stairs. ‘Go up to Rab’s and...
Cherry

grimms29

After a while Tony and Angela get sick of hiding from a giant dinosaur under the bed and crawl out dusty and uneaten, which is just as well, because...
Cherry

grimms28

When Dermot answers the door, he’s not sure what to expect. ‘I’m Marie,’ she says, holding a soft hand out for him to shake. ‘And I’m a social worker...
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grimm27

The school nurse’s grey hair resembles an unkempt blackbird’s nest, with a pokey wee white hat stranded on it. She has squeezed into her white...

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1691 of my comments have received 1725 Great Feedback votes

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the intestines of novels are

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020

the intestines of novels are always tricky, especially when you're eating and drinking and talking. Life can get messy. Words we can hide behind. 

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Posted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe

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‘For Christ sake, the dog’s

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020

‘For Christ sake, the dog’s giving birth on my bed. Don’t just stand there, bloody do something.’

A dog giving birth on a bed is a good opening, but to leave the voice unattributed, hanging, as the opening sentence is equivalent of opening...

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Posted in The Human Touch: Chapter One

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when you're doing something,

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020

when you're doing something, you're doing something else. you're being someone (else). 

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Posted in Ironing, a woman's half hour

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I guessed that Harrison would

Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2020

I guessed that Harrison would become Grant. Good start to the body-swap story genre (if such a genre exists?)

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Posted in "Past and Present" Chapter 1

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good story. I don't think you

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2020

good story. I don't think you need to reiterate about the cancer being in the middle of Jeff's stomach. 

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Posted in I Can Never Say Sorry…

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yes - and moe. But we can but

Posted on Sun, 21 Jun 2020

yes - and moe. But we can but try to define it. 

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Posted in What is Love?

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hail, spring indeed. 

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

hail, spring indeed. 

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Posted in This year's walk...(08)

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for perhaps the first time,

Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2020

for perhaps the first time, the younger generation can no longer expect to have a better life than their parents. That's the saddest part. As you mention, the rich had it easy. They still do. The poor had bleak and short lives, or so we would...

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Posted in Living In Another Era.

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there's hope for us all

Posted on Tue, 09 Jun 2020

there's hope for us all -eventually. 

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Posted in The Interviewee (2045)

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thnaks delibetely ev and

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

thnaks delibetely ev and everyone else who vetured in. Let's get out there and write (there should be some dramatic music here).  

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