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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2853576 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1691 of my 15,690 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1725 votes

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Grimms51

Bruno is hanging about waiting for Tony when he comes out of the office. ‘An ambulance came and took Hunter away,’ he explains. ‘Hunter swears he’s...
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Grimms50

Tony places the fork carefully back down on the table, beside the butter dish. Clutching his eye, a colourful arabesque, milky with red veins, half-...
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Pick of the Month

Grimms49

Tony shares a room at the top of the stairs with Bruno. ‘He’s a bed-wetter,’ whispers Julie. ‘We may get him up during the night to take him to the...
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Grimms48

Rab cashes his Giro the next day and agrees to meet Jaz and the Tash back in the pub. Jaz sits waiting, nursing a warm pint, the Tash beside him...
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Grimms47

Outside the snooker club, a black Hackney cab across the road lets somebody off. Jaz pulls his collar up against drizzling rain, decides since he’s...

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1691 of my comments have received 1725 Great Feedback votes

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sea spirit guides us all, not

Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021

sea spirit guides us all, not all, but you, certainly. 

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Posted in To a Lone Sailor

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magically evoked, if we

Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2021

magically evoked, if we turned into a tree what bitter fruits would we? 

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Posted in Apple Tree

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we are indeed on the edge of

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

we are indeed on the edge of colour, especially as we get older. 

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Posted in The Edge of Colour

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this is a beautiful story. I

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

this is a beautiful story. I said that the last time and I echo it here. brilliant 

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Posted in Last Things

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always check where you're

Posted on Thu, 07 Jan 2021

always check where you're being kidnapped to insert. Yes. It features in every story so far. 

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Posted in Tam McSwiggan

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great opening, bit rushed in

Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2021

great opening, bit rushed in the end. dead cat mystery resolved. enjoyed reading. 

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Posted in The Dead Cat

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The woman led Mary to an

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2021

The woman led Mary to an empty table, and pointed to one side, then sat at the other. Mary sat on one side  table, the long haired woman on the other side.

Needs another few drafts. The above sentence is an example. Get it down first if...

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Posted in part 3 (redrafted)

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yeh, I want nick nick and the

Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2021

yeh, I want nick nick and the shirts too. 

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Posted in Sacred Shirts (2)

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flower-scented dreams are

Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2020

flower-scented dreams are usually a blessing (well, in my book) as this is. 

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Posted in Symphony Of Emotions

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Janet Kay’s “Silly Games, aha

Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2020

Janet Kay’s “Silly Games, aha, did one of those stupid zoom meetings (in the etheral audience) with the writers of Small Axe, in which this single, of course, featured heavily in one episode. 

great plot twist with the gun, will he? will...

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Posted in Happy New Year

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