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My stories have been read 3605123 times
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Grimms 76
Awash with pints and halfs and even mouth puckering gin, with a slice of lemon and whisky in the same glass. Cocktails of his own devising. His day...
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Grimms75
With all the cash Jaz is carrying and the hurry-scurry Rab is surprised to be standing beside him at a bus stop waiting for a bus. Jaz has brought...
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Grimms 74
Jaz hears the loud screeching and the rising harangue which follows. It woke him up. It wakes the whole tenement block. The smell of cigarette smoke...
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Grimms73
‘You don’t need to be daft and drown yerself. You can just drink the poison to kill yerself.’ Bruno is deft at sneaking up on people and has big lugs...
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'Go'
You belong to the normal generation. Everything clear-cut and solvable. Climate change stabilised. No more poverty. Hunger eradicated. The gap...
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this is great. Loneliness
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
this is great. Loneliness unravels us and poverty leaves us to our own devices. Both are entwined here. A work you should be proud of.
Read full commentPosted in Old P
yes, indeed can be poisonous,
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
yes, indeed can be poisonous, Beauty often is.
Read full commentPosted in Eves' Tears
you're certainlty not
Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022
you're certainlty not grossing us out. You're living it and we follow what you're going through. Nothiing gross. Nobel.
Read full commentPosted in Janus 12
I think she wants to give
Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022
I think she wants to give birth to the baby Jesus. I really like this, but too much exposition. .Need to lighten it a bit with dialogue. Perhaps some kind of arguement about which baby Jesus they want? the black or white one?
Read full commentPosted in Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Living in the moment Jenny.
Posted on Mon, 16 May 2022
Living in the moment Jenny. An open book. An open window.
Read full commentPosted in Open Windows Of My Soul
yeh, made tastier by being
Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022
yeh, made tastier by being forbidden, I guess.
Read full commentPosted in The Forbidden Kiss
the worse case scenario, as
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2022
the worse case scenario, as you know, is undigested food. Well, there's a lot of worst-case scenarios and you've covered most of them. Nothing gross about it. Keep writing from the front line.
Read full commentPosted in Hospital 3 and Janus 11
lovely, but living in
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
lovely, but living in Scotland we dont' learn about sunshine until we're adults.
Read full commentPosted in You learn about the sunshine
I'm glad you've remained
Posted on Wed, 11 May 2022
I'm glad you've remained obfective enoght to write it all down.
Read full commentPosted in Hospital 2, Janus 10
I can't tell my trees from my
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
I can't tell my trees from my woods, but you make it sound easy.
Read full commentPosted in Maple Tree Den
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