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I have 1179 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2549233 times and 1205 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1650 of my 15,514 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1682 votes

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Cherry

Grimms43

By celticman on Sat, 18 Mar 2017

On the second landing, Jaz can’t wait. He nips into the cludgie and pulls the door over, stands leaning, left hand splayed against peeling paint of...
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Gold cherry

grimms42

By celticman on Fri, 17 Mar 2017

At 11.45 am three masked men burst through the door of the Linen Bank on Dunbarton Road, stocking masks over their faces. ‘This is a stick up,’...
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Certificate 15
Cherry

grimms41

By celticman on Thu, 16 Mar 2017

Tony remembers a parade of uniforms and much mumbling just outside of hearing. He forgets who has come or who had gone. Memories and dreams mixed up...
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Cherry

grimms40

By celticman on Wed, 15 Mar 2017

There is a vacancy in the way Tony looks out the car window at the sweep of tenement building they pass and a sense of unease that they are going in...
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Cherry

grimms39

By celticman on Sat, 11 Mar 2017

Tony hunch-shouldered, tethers himself like a human-shaped balloon on the edge of familiar things, the chair his da usually sits in, watching the...
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Certificate 15

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1650 of my comments have received 1682 Great Feedback votes

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sad, very sad, animals and

Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2020

sad, very sad, animals and people, facing the same monster we created. 

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Posted in An Australian View

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wonderful. Ewan namechecked

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020

wonderful. Ewan namechecked me because I named a pair of shoes my character was wearng, Adidas Samba. These were the top of the tree. One of my cllass mates had a pair. I noticed he wre them all the times. We went to PE, he wore them for titba....

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Posted in I Name that Shoe....

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haunting 

Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2020

haunting 

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Posted in Gatorland

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we all chase our dreams,

Posted on Thu, 01 Oct 2020

we all chase our dreams, sometimes, if we're very lucky, we catch them. 

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Posted in After Dark

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I like a bit of 'wildness'

Posted on Sun, 13 Sep 2020

I like a bit of 'wildness' gathered here. 

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Posted in gather

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I couldn't be doing with all

Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2020

I couldn't be doing with all that blue (and red and white) as it's a mortal sin. As for Henry VIII, just your typical, run-of-the-mill monarch, good to see he left a sound table, if not a sound reputation. You put it to good use. No chopping...

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Posted in Flamingo Hotel. Bookings Now Open.

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nicely done, jenny. 

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020

nicely done, jenny. 

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Posted in Thinking Out Loud

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not sure I understand it, but

Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2020

not sure I understand it, but hey, it feels right. 

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Posted in Epiales

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I didn't noitce the picture

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020

I didn't noitce the picture of the eagle. Aha, blindsided, like Darren, and the eagle, I suppose. Good story. 

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Posted in No Eagles Allowed

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sad words Jenny, but there's

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020

sad words Jenny, but there's love there and that's always good. 

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Posted in Needing Hugs

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