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I have 1193 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3055654 times and 1221 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1738 of my 15,847 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1778 votes

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Cherry

Grimms57

Pizza Face pulls his duffle coat hood down, to show he is serious, even though the rain is coming down horizontal. He does a feint and step-over, is...
Cherry

Grimms56

Angela stands, waiting. Bob shouts again. ‘Jesus,’ he rants, when there’s no reply and no sign of footfall. ‘You better come in, then.’ She cranes...
Cherry

Grimms55

Pizza Face sits on the floor in the living room, his back against the wall, tilting his head, gnawing at his thumbnail until his cuticles redden and...

Grimms54

The social-work meeting takes place after lunch. Tony lies on top of his bed, with belly ache, paging through a stained Readers Digest he’d found on...
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Grimms53

At breakfast Bob plonks himself beside Tony, ready to make a grab at him if he shows any inkling to butcher another resident or even staff, with a...

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1738 of my comments have received 1778 Great Feedback votes

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a loud whiisper is an

Posted on Fri, 04 Jun 2021

a loud whiisper is an oxymoron. But I know what you mean. Choose whiisper or loud. Not both. 

moonlight doesn't trickle. 

great start, plenty of foot-to-the-floor action. And the question of what they needed to steal and why remains...

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Posted in Don't Look Back

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Blade Runner was certainly

Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021

Blade Runner was certainly better than the book. They tended to be prescient, but shit. Brought up o a diet of Star Trek, this is one of the great monolgues (not in the book). I'm rambling. Great poem. 

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Posted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

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a happily unhappy story with

Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021

a happily unhappy story with an unhappy ending. Here's were we say, older and wiser, but life as you've shown is rarely that simple. 

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Posted in The one that got away

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bowl of fruit analogy works

Posted on Fri, 28 May 2021

bowl of fruit analogy works well.

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Posted in Alternatives

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if we get the truth, then

Posted on Thu, 27 May 2021

if we get the truth, then that's win-win. Certainly doesn't happen in politics, but maybe in cat patrol. 

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 10

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you gave me the jitters. I

Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021

you gave me the jitters. I thought Trump was back, no longer barred from Facebook and Twitter and returning to the land of his mom's birth. Thank god it's fiction. 

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Posted in The Sure Yank Redemption

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I'm never sure when a poem's

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

I'm never sure when a poem's a poem, but as an elegy to the past- yeh, love it. 

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Posted in When We Were Young

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it's funny who we are is what

Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021

it's funny who we are is what we are, your mum in bloom as a flower lover. 

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Posted in Capturing Garden Memories

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not a fan of the Royals. But

Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021

not a fan of the Royals. But hey, loisng the internet is a royal pain. 

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Posted in The Internet Is Finally Restored (By An Angel) by Alfred N.Muggins

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I guess everyone is a poet or

Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021

I guess everyone is a poet or peasant or both. 

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Posted in In Conversation With Bears

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