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Enjoyed this, I ran away to
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
Enjoyed this, I ran away to Scotland too, but decades older than you! Would never have been brave enough at 19
I liked your accounts of all your jumper knitting friends, and their worries about Glasgow at night. They cared about you lots,...
I really like the idea of dandelion seeds floating through the air being like kind words that we keep "squirreled away" maybe forgotten but their kindness roots in us, like a little sun, maybe one day to set free comforting words from us, that...
This was very interesting, thankyou, But also, a father's love shines through, making this so much more than a well written perspective on unfolding History. Am so glad he is home! If there is increased conscription in Russia, it must be better...
This made me think of holidaymakers being another kind of tide. "Lives that exist only for months" is great. Lights do go on in houses without views too, where the locals live all year round :0)
If you do get in to correct things, you have Heath 1974-1974?
I do hope you are wrong about the next PM. But on the other hand, that might just be England's problem :0) I liked Gordon Brown, too. I worry, like you, that it was because he...
Did you mean for the tallness of your poem to give a feeling of height? It made me think of climbing up. I am amazed how both you and Jenny can put yourselves and your readers into the world of these fierce, powerful, graceful birds
I agree with you about not liking to clap! Have never known anyone else that thinks that! And listening to it, too, it's like being a piece of metal hammered by a blacksmith, isn't it? and you can't get out, with all the people round you in rows...
Enjoyed this, I ran away to
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
Enjoyed this, I ran away to Scotland too, but decades older than you! Would never have been brave enough at 19
I liked your accounts of all your jumper knitting friends, and their worries about Glasgow at night. They cared about you lots,...
Read full commentPosted in Ray's Memories age 19
I really like the idea of
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
I really like the idea of dandelion seeds floating through the air being like kind words that we keep "squirreled away" maybe forgotten but their kindness roots in us, like a little sun, maybe one day to set free comforting words from us, that...
Read full commentPosted in Maple Tree Den
This was very intesresting
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
This was very interesting, thankyou, But also, a father's love shines through, making this so much more than a well written perspective on unfolding History. Am so glad he is home! If there is increased conscription in Russia, it must be better...
Read full commentPosted in A Final Message From Moscow
This is too good for any
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
This is too good for any comment I can thinkk of,, even of your poems it is one of my favourites so far, will want to be able to read again forever
Read full commentPosted in You learn about the sunshine
This made me think of
Posted on Sun, 08 May 2022
This made me think of holidaymakers being another kind of tide. "Lives that exist only for months" is great. Lights do go on in houses without views too, where the locals live all year round :0)
Read full commentPosted in The visit
I liked your "plunge" at the
Posted on Thu, 05 May 2022
I liked your "plunge" at the line end, and "browse" the sky, linked with eye brows for scowl, that's clever :0)
Read full commentPosted in Hræfn
Posted on Mon, 02 May 2022
You definitely convey the dangerous feel in some Jazz, to someone like me who is more of a scaredy than a cool sort of cat
"high flying on
haze of hopefully not dying
crafty foxes calculating:
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Read full commentPosted in Trail Of Thought
If you do get in to correct
Posted on Tue, 03 May 2022
If you do get in to correct things, you have Heath 1974-1974?
I do hope you are wrong about the next PM. But on the other hand, that might just be England's problem :0) I liked Gordon Brown, too. I worry, like you, that it was because he...
Read full commentPosted in Ingerland My Ingerland: The Prime Ministers Who Made Me
Did you mean for the tallness
Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022
Did you mean for the tallness of your poem to give a feeling of height? It made me think of climbing up. I am amazed how both you and Jenny can put yourselves and your readers into the world of these fierce, powerful, graceful birds
Read full commentPosted in Tumultuous Times
I agree with you about not
Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2022
I agree with you about not liking to clap! Have never known anyone else that thinks that! And listening to it, too, it's like being a piece of metal hammered by a blacksmith, isn't it? and you can't get out, with all the people round you in rows...
Read full commentPosted in The Clappers
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