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Ethan weaves all through this
Posted on Thu, 15 Dec 2022
Ethan weaves all through this, though not the narrator he is the most important character in a way, isn't he? The one who must be protected, and the voice you give him is perfect. I love "Who are all those voices?" and the car being "good because...
I liked this very much, all the information in a torrent! You express how precious,special it is, in the universe, really well. Only, please say what does bipolar solvent mean?
The sombre feel to this, the sense of respect, made me think of the heartbreaking tragedy in the news yesterday, particularly the last part. an elegy for them
great to hear you read this, and also now to read, I love the snorkel bit, but then how the narrator changes becomes less isolated on his own once his family has gone, and at the end, he seems as infected by love as much as a virus. A weird and...
snowman looks as though about to do a twirl :0) I really enjoyed your record of a thrilling day (perfect title!) and you communicated the wonder infectiously, thankyou!
I am always awestruck how you manage to put huge thoughts and feelings in so simple and pure a way. How much high faluting writing there is about space and this
how high, how far,
and here how still ,
so far below
THANKYOU!!! Wow, that is so great to hear, no one has ever wanted one of my poems before :0) Of course you can have it,if you think it would be ok! I don't know anything about copyright I am afraid. How much seems right to you?
Ethan weaves all through this
Posted on Thu, 15 Dec 2022
Ethan weaves all through this, though not the narrator he is the most important character in a way, isn't he? The one who must be protected, and the voice you give him is perfect. I love "Who are all those voices?" and the car being "good because...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 28
I liked this very much, all
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2022
I liked this very much, all the information in a torrent! You express how precious,special it is, in the universe, really well. Only, please say what does bipolar solvent mean?
Read full commentPosted in The Amazing Molecule!
The sombre feel to this, the
Posted on Wed, 14 Dec 2022
The sombre feel to this, the sense of respect, made me think of the heartbreaking tragedy in the news yesterday, particularly the last part. an elegy for them
Read full commentPosted in Mid-Winter
This gorgeous poem about a
Posted on Mon, 12 Dec 2022
This gorgeous poem about a walk in new snow is Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
Jenny, this photo is
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Read full commentPosted in Walk In December Snow
great to hear you read this,
Posted on Mon, 12 Dec 2022
great to hear you read this, and also now to read, I love the snorkel bit, but then how the narrator changes becomes less isolated on his own once his family has gone, and at the end, he seems as infected by love as much as a virus. A weird and...
Read full commentPosted in Your Mutual Aid Hourly Pay Insults My Intelligence
snowman looks as though about
Posted on Mon, 12 Dec 2022
snowman looks as though about to do a twirl :0) I really enjoyed your record of a thrilling day (perfect title!) and you communicated the wonder infectiously, thankyou!
Read full commentPosted in Thrill
I am always awestruck how you
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022
I am always awestruck how you manage to put huge thoughts and feelings in so simple and pure a way. How much high faluting writing there is about space and this
how high, how far,
and here how still ,
so far below
has...
Read full commentPosted in Afterglow
£10 is fine :0) Thanks!
Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2022
£10 is fine :0) Thanks!
Read full commentPosted in to a pear
This is like the first
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022
I liked how you slip from descriptions of the photo to "We were married once"
Can see him going from one sad person to another, making sure they are ok then moving on.
The juggling between human and dog feelings is just right - my...
Read full commentPosted in The Last Wish of Christmas
THANKYOU!!! Wow, that is so
Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2022
THANKYOU!!! Wow, that is so great to hear, no one has ever wanted one of my poems before :0) Of course you can have it,if you think it would be ok! I don't know anything about copyright I am afraid. How much seems right to you?
Read full commentPosted in to a pear
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